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Are you aware that Halloween Is another name for All Hallow's Eve? Therefore saying Halloween Eve would be like saying All Hallow's Eve Eve.
3752705 you've got a point there
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Seconded
6352132 fixed it... better?
Didn't seem like that big an issue but whatever
Erm if an object is in the atmosphere and creating shooting star trail it would not take a few hours to crash it would be minutes at most.
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I had the same thought. Maybe Lucy was running some sort of orbital compensation program to allow a more controlled descent? It shouldn't have crashed if it took hours, but still...
Also, damn. Jake must have had a hell of a sleep to sleep through 300,000 people dying.
Question: Did he consider attempting to stop the ship/making the ship inoperable?
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Well its not really said but its implied that the ship is overrun completely by this point. Going to the bridge is probably a death sentance.
Welp.
If only they had a Cole Protocol...
But wait, Jake would be dead then... Just the memory erasure, then.
I think its suppose to be " Commencing Hyperspace jump.Destination, NOT SPECIFIED....Increasing gravity"
Cause hyperdrive is refering to the engine.ππ»
I think you need to change the term escape pod to something more logical like escape frigate or ship cause when reading further in the the story, it said that there are showers and hallways in it and I think an escape pod is too small for it.By the way great story so far.Keep it upππ»ππ»ππ»