[humanized] To clear the huge debt they have toward an influent gang leader in New York, Vinyl and her friends had to resort to stealing. Years later, the four, now expert burglars, must accomplish their final theft. Except nothing goes as planned!
You seriously know how to write adventure stories. The right amount of tenseness, seriousness, action, description, the whole nine (and more ) yards. Seriously. Good stuff, right here.
Now for a funny story. I actually saw my email say that this updated while I was on my lunch break in the break room of where I work and figured I could certainly take the time to read it. I was enjoying the action, the drama, how Rarity was freaking out when.... I came across this :
You know the meme of flipping tables and your lid? Yeah, I do that at home (no real tables flipped, but still) when it comes to this kind of thing. I had been following along the girls' previous assumption of Sombre at least being a part of the betrayal but when I saw Sanagi and Alard, I freaked out. But then I remembered I was in the break room of my work, where I was trying to appear at least semi-professional and there were actually a few other co-workers there as well. So instead of cussing the sky blue and banging on the table and pacing and shouting at the characters like I would do at home (I get too involved in the story, hence why I don't read gore ), I had to mute myself and limit the flaring of my arms and not actually try and damage property. After half a minute of going nuts about who was leading the betrayal from the thief side, I just paused and did some calming breaths and was able to continue reading.
Unfortunately, some co-workers saw me freaking out and thought that I was having a seisure.... Luckily, the story of me going nuts hadn't gotten out too much at work, it was a busy/boring night.
So yeah, to make a long story short (too late! I know), you are a seriously good writer when it comes to action (though GTVS was good too )
4066347 Google translate to get to romanji writing. then I use a romanji to hiragana and katakana converter.... Though, apparently it's not really effective... I might just stop with the japanese writing :p
4072475 No no, it was good. I'm just saying it was so good that I really got mad at the betraying thieves. Really can't wait to see AJ go nuts on these guys for even threatening to hurt Rarity (let alone all the s*** they made up to get them to go along with the plan).
Vinyl took those thugs down... LIKE A NINJA BOSS!!! I'm so glad Sanagi isn't siding with Sombra and Alcard to betray Vinyl. I'm guessing her people gave Vinyl some ninja training. AND IT WAS AWESOME!!!! I hope Vinyl and her team can rescue Sanagi and her girls. I also hope Cadence doesn't agree with her father and wants a rematch with Jack enough to get caught so Twilight doesn't loose her. Basically, kill off the three male douche bags, give Sanagi their empires, and everyone wins.
I love this! It is amazing and baddass and sexy and just... Yeah just pure amazing awesomeness! I'm guessing this fics gonna take a back row seat while GTVS gets up and running again. Am I correct in my presumptions?
Nice chapter! Also... I guess... First?
Just the right amount of badass Vinyl xD She's cruel and efficient, but she only does it because she has to.
Also, I now dislike Sombra & Bluebutt even more... But I like Sanagi-Hime :3
Wow Crazy!!! That was epic! Vinyl is some sort of ninja right? At least I think, it just makes sense to me.
Poor Rarity, also I'm a little concerned about Neon. I could be wrong. Great chapter.
You seriously know how to write adventure stories. The right amount of tenseness, seriousness, action, description, the whole nine (and more ) yards. Seriously. Good stuff, right here.
Now for a funny story. I actually saw my email say that this updated while I was on my lunch break in the break room of where I work and figured I could certainly take the time to read it. I was enjoying the action, the drama, how Rarity was freaking out when.... I came across this :
You know the meme of flipping tables and your lid? Yeah, I do that at home (no real tables flipped, but still) when it comes to this kind of thing. I had been following along the girls' previous assumption of Sombre at least being a part of the betrayal but when I saw Sanagi and Alard, I freaked out. But then I remembered I was in the break room of my work, where I was trying to appear at least semi-professional and there were actually a few other co-workers there as well. So instead of cussing the sky blue and banging on the table and pacing and shouting at the characters like I would do at home (I get too involved in the story, hence why I don't read gore ), I had to mute myself and limit the flaring of my arms and not actually try and damage property. After half a minute of going nuts about who was leading the betrayal from the thief side, I just paused and did some calming breaths and was able to continue reading.
Unfortunately, some co-workers saw me freaking out and thought that I was having a seisure.... Luckily, the story of me going nuts hadn't gotten out too much at work, it was a busy/boring night.
So yeah, to make a long story short (too late! I know), you are a seriously good writer when it comes to action (though GTVS was good too )
so every person on vinyls team is a bad-ass. even the alligator!
Great chapter again
Love it even more
one question though
How do you translate Sanagis sentence into Japanese? Cuz it doesn't sound right to me
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Google translate to get to romanji writing. then I use a romanji to hiragana and katakana converter.... Though, apparently it's not really effective... I might just stop with the japanese writing :p
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おらぎりもの is right :D
おなじ お に り sounds weird / wrong
I would recommend : キミたちも (Kimitachi mo = you (plural) also)
Well you don't have to stop using it
I like it :3
Maybe double check it with someone who speaks it
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In the next chapters you'll learn about where Vinyl got her skills.
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Thanks for the compliment, sorry I put you in a table flipping mood
it wasn't the purpose.
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in their own specialty... sort of.
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Glad you liked it ^^
4072475 No no, it was good. I'm just saying it was so good that I really got mad at the betraying thieves. Really can't wait to see AJ go nuts on these guys for even threatening to hurt Rarity (let alone all the s*** they made up to get them to go along with the plan).
Vinyl took those thugs down... LIKE A NINJA BOSS!!! I'm so glad Sanagi isn't siding with Sombra and Alcard to betray Vinyl. I'm guessing her people gave Vinyl some ninja training. AND IT WAS AWESOME!!!! I hope Vinyl and her team can rescue Sanagi and her girls. I also hope Cadence doesn't agree with her father and wants a rematch with Jack enough to get caught so Twilight doesn't loose her. Basically, kill off the three male douche bags, give Sanagi their empires, and everyone wins.
So are vinyl and Beatrice going to get together or meet or something?
This chapter. I like it. *Throws computer at wall* ANOTHER!!!!!!!!!
Not enough. Not even close. Now update, finish story, and I will be happy.
4075334 u stole those words from my brain! (Accusing face)
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She's like in that image
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Not much I can do about it then.
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This fic is fucking fabulous!
5/5 moustaches so far
I love this!
It is amazing and baddass and sexy and just... Yeah just pure amazing awesomeness!
I'm guessing this fics gonna take a back row seat while GTVS gets up and running again.
Am I correct in my presumptions?
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Sort of ^^
So did Vinyl go with the other 4 or stayed by herself
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She stayed behind just a little bit
Awesome!
I.Need.Moar!!!!!