The changes in names threw me for a little, I can understand why some of them would be different than GTVS, but again, I'm not an expert at guessing the names to the ponies they relate to.

I must say though, I just knew what had happened when Gummy dropped the purse to Vinyl. I laughed for a minute, just imagining a dog-acting alligator coming up and taking a purse.

And thinking of my personal favorite pairings, it would be interesting to see half the police staff hook up with the thieves. Even if they didn't know it was them. And I read all the other stories you have, I'm hoping you stick to some of the pairings you did before because they would be funny as heck.

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Yeah... Maybe I should Say in the author note who's who in the police unit
As for the shipping, if it happens, I think it would most likely be one of the three pairings from AppleScratch

I read Rarity , I read Twila and I call upon shipping.. but then I remind myself it is NOT about shipping..
and then I quitly get back to read it and eating ice cream to fill the hole in my heart.

I love this fic.. but I sure wanna know why they are stealing in the first place..
doesn't seem to be a normal thing for them.. OR IS IT?

Awesome job again

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Reason they are stealing would be explained in the next chapter normally.

3156142 aye, if you use the pairings as the ones in AppleScratch then it makes it all the more funny. Though it is interesting enough without. I just can't help it, I'm a romantic at heart.

Though as a side note, Jack I get because of how Applejack acts (especially in your other stories). But my dad is named Claude and for the life of me I can't remember if it can be a girl's name or not. So that bit threw me off, but again, it's really good anyways, I just get a little sidetracked when reading.

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Well, in France, Claude is a name both for men and Women (though the latter not very often used be due to how masculine the name sound,) But there's a funny story about Cloud's human name's origins... you'll have to wait the moment it's written

PS: I'm also a sucker for romance story

3156418 Funny enough, he's French Canadian. Hence why I couldn't recall perfectly if it was or not. But anyways, so long as two stories get regularly updated (doesn't matter which really) then it's all good.

They are really good.

I love Gummy. Best pet, as always.
I'm guessing Discord is who they're indebted to, and I'm very interested in how Luna will come in. Dash, Gilda and Lightning Dust made me laugh.

Gummy, I'm so proud of you!
I like where all this is headed. Needs moar Octavia, though.
Hintity-hint-hint.

Mari, I loved it! It was a really good chapter and i can't wait for more! But first, when will there be another GTVS?

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That'll have to wait until I finished my re-write of Apple Scratch toward the World, but as soon as its done, I'm getting back to GTVS and Scratchin' thieves

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Now, just because she isn't tagged, doesn't mean she isn't planned in the story After all, a good story about Vinyl must also include Octavia

3158385 Okay! I will wait patiently as i have done! And im glad there will be octavia cuz otherwise it would be: What? No Tavi Fun/interesting relationship? Im glad you are such a great writer.

Stay Imaginative!

You've outdone yourself again, good sir xD By the way, if the police is smart, they can track down who sent the files to his computer and hunt Vinyl down D: Nuuuu D:

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Thanks
but Don't forget that It's Patty (aka Pinkie Pie) who hacked the security company...

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YES! Now I'm super-pumped for this fic!

That is the face of a man that is super-pumped.

“Ah hate the Apple Company!” Jack muttered angrily when she noticed the apple-shaped logo on the computer.
I just want to say "Dat Irony."

Gummy is Best Pet, whether in Equestria or the real world.

This seems like a really cool cross between Leverage and CSI, but with humanized MLP characters. As always, you've managed to capture my attention with an excellent story. I look forward to more!

Hey. I've been following your stories for a while, and i just want to thank you. I love the apple scratch series and this story is amazing so far. Personally, i don't think your first story needed a rewrite, but it's never a bad thing. I'm looking foward to updates to this, equestria games, and the CK story. Also i think this story needs some good romance. You have a certain knack for shipping, where you make it real, and it's hard to find someone like that. I think you should keep the same ships from the 2nd or 3rd apple scratch's, but i wouldn't be against a little "Jack" and "Claude". Just keep up the fantastic work.

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Huh, nope! Beatrice is beauty brass ^^ the one on the right. light brown mane (hair) wear light blue
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Have you been playing GTA V good sir?

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Sadly, it was out of stock when I went to buy it in the store next-door

Awesome story! One of the few non-romance stories that I like
Just some things on the side,
-There are still some mistakes and stuff that could be fixed with more careful editing/proofreading.
-Would be great if you could maybe put the renames somewhere maybe in the description or authors note. Cuz as much fun as it is to guess, it can kill the flow of the story if the reader doesn't know who it is.
But aside from that, I'll favorite this and will be looking forward to more!!!

Wow, good story. I like this idea you have. It's funny and great. Even the Apple company joke.

HIS NAME IS SHERMAN!!! TEHE!!! That gets me every time!