OH MAH CELESTIA, THIS CHAPTA! I read the other few and they made me sad, but tears came on this one...

I just...feel so horrible for RD.

3078854 Yea This was the hardest to get finished. Had to do my best to portay the image correctly.

the only thing I thought after reading this was "Twilight! Why didn't you magic yourself over there instead of making rainbow fix the bridge you lazy D-bag?!?!"

3079085 Twilight always had that issue with using her magic at the right time.

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Exactly what I was thinking. She could have levitated pinkie away from the crocodiles, Rarity away from Steven Magnet, and saved Applejack from falling. Of course pinkie and rarity might have bled out from their leg wounds, but she could have at least tried to help. Still a good story though.

3079732 Your voice acting, a tleast for Twilight, is pretty good. Loved how you did Twintel in Schemering Sintel reading... oh by the way. Ya might like this Twintel's Journey

3079798 Well, with Applejack was very little she could of done, since she had limited time to think of what to do then do it.

Pinkie and Rarity she could of tried, but Pinkie most likely would of died from her injuries regardless. Rarity there was hope, but she basically froze up.

Interesting, seems you've quoted a comment from another story somehow.

This was a tough one to read, since Rainbow Dash is my second-favorite member of the Mane 6 (my favorite being Pinkie Pie), but it was quite well done. Rainbow Dash decides to forgo her loyalty to Twilight (not to mention her fallen friends) and joins the Shadowbolts and pays a horrific price for her decision. Thank Celestia this is an AU fic, or I would really be depressed.

Now Twilight goes to face Nightmare Moon! I have a feeling what's going to happen, but I am looking forward to how you will illustrate it.

3080151 Mmmhmm, tried to make her reasoning for forgetting her loyalty a valid one, instead of just saying, "Eh, screw em I'll join" more or less. With the ego stroking from the show, and playing off her fears of dying and her dreams being fulfilled.

Technically, Rainbow Dash hasn't died though, but like Twilight said, her fate is worse then death. Eternal life as a wraith, constantly reliving that moment of weakness when she abandoned her friends for her dreams.

Twilight's is gonna be a hard one to write, since she is my favorite character from the show. All of them was pretty tough to do, since I love all the ponies.

.....dat rainbow ghoul....
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Wo-Ho did everyone just read that, conspiracy

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Wouldn't RD eventually die from lack of oxygen? Flying all the way to the atmosphere, even with magic fueling her, there had to be a limit to how much her possessed body could take...