Nightmare Moon has returned, and the Elements of Harmony go after her into the Everfree forest. But things take a dark turn when Nightmare Moon's trials are failed.
First thought - get an editor to tidy up. Some punctuation would come in handy here and there. Second thought - I would have thought that Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy managed to catch the two... but Fluttershy, not being used to carrying anything bigger than a bunny, ends up dropping Applejack. But that's just me. One way or another, poor Applejack perishes.
Wow, there is something out of the ordinary when I looked at this, but this brings a what if Twilight didn't trust anyone in reality. Oh man, poor Applejack.
this an intersting idea....
This story wins the not so prestigious award of, Meh.
First thought - get an editor to tidy up. Some punctuation would come in handy here and there.
Second thought - I would have thought that Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy managed to catch the two... but Fluttershy, not being used to carrying anything bigger than a bunny, ends up dropping Applejack. But that's just me. One way or another, poor Applejack perishes.
FINALLY! Someone who writes a story about the mane six dying and doing it correctly.
Very good story...I liked it, and those five dislikes are probably bronies who can't bear to see the idols they masturbate to get killed.
But anyways, very good story, I upvoted and I will keep reading.
Wow, there is something out of the ordinary when I looked at this, but this brings a what if Twilight didn't trust anyone in reality. Oh man, poor Applejack.
So technically she would have been okay if she had let go due to teleport