IT BEGINS

We are getting somewhere here. Also, FAUST!!!

Now to the nitpicking: Please, for the love of Faust, stick to hands. "Stubs" gives me the cold sweat. They are already humanised so you could stick with them having hands, not to mention it would make holding weapons easier.
Also, E and above are ridiculously large and impractical so I recommend you flatten them a bit. Stay in the B-D department (Fluttershy might do good with E).
Also everyone knows that Twilight is a "flat chest"
*gets whiped by a frying pen*
Hey hey hey! Just because I said you are flat doesnt mean you are any less beautiful!

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I was thinking of them holding the weapons without hands becoming a joke sometime later also gives the whole Lyra scene I've got in mind a place but I'll think about changing it if it bothers enough of yall

Also on the breast size....ya too much I was letting my perverted side take the reins at the time that'll most likely be changed

2993741 Fair enough. Kepp going as you see it fit, its your story afterall.

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of course

also the 'stubs' thing won't last as he learns the proper names of things he may be an immortal merc but he is still ignorant to his surroundings

2993758 Hehe, this is going to get interesting.

, I finally get a story in my Dust 514/EVE Online group!

also, why does the cover image make me think of that song "Mad World"?

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I finaly joined a Dust/EVE online group

also I have no idea

Edit: I know for a fact that there are at least two EVE online fics on fimfic

Please no stubs. I don't know why but that just seems weird. Especially when they appear human like in most other ways.

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You are the second or third person to say that I believe if it's truly bothering yall so much I'll change it. Although I'd have to change the Lyra scene as well........

did you just go full retard ?

Has known them for a total of 5 minutes and has already determined that they're not ready to his tech and second the art of war can be taught to any level of advancement the art of war isn't tech there genius they can be taught it safely