Not bad, though I'd recommend putting a space after each comma, check your capitalisation, that sort of stuff. I could proofread this for you if you want.
The survey of my surroundings came to a screeching halt when I heard something that had no rights whatsoever to be in a place like this, the screams of a woman, no the screams of multiple women. Knowing that no soldier would scream like that, unless there was an orbital bombardment on their position
Shrugging I did the only thing I could at the moment : walk in a random direction until I find something interesting and or dangerous, my plan of action for most things
Not bad, though I'd recommend putting a space after each comma, check your capitalisation, that sort of stuff. I could proofread this for you if you want.
bah scouts
WOO MINMATER!!
ALL THE TRUE REFERENCES
11/10 Story Content: Would hack objective again.