A super soldier dies in battle and ends up in Equestria. How will he react to the peace when all he knew was death?
Ha ha ha no.
2876544 No you didn't.
And suddenly the house exploded.
the clop was awesome.
Can't you hear my heart beat so...
the word hear is supposed to be feel (you messed this up a few times)
great story so far sad too
good story im glad i stayed this long (is there a part 5 i smell)
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That's just how the lyrics were, I didn't write it. But thanks for the like.
REACTION TO CLOPbefore: this could get interestingAfter: O_O DAYUM NMM is a freak in bed!!! myfacewhen.net/uploads/3667-damn.jpg
3962231 I wanted to make her seem kinky, but only because it's Shadow. I'm glad somepony gave my something on that, I was worried I done screwed up.
3968175 Well let's just say you get a pat on the back, but for God's sake please tell me it ain't gonna happen to the other characters.
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SWEET LUNA, NO!!!! Whether you mean in this story or the other stories my answer is still the same. Which is, 'Fuck you! I aiiiiiiiiiiiin't having that shit!'
3975079 Oh thank Godcdn1.goodmeme.net/store/user_photos/0/17/3069_praise_the_lord.._700.jpg
Just a quick reminder, Chapter 2 has been edited and I'd like to hear your thoughts on the fight.
I am terrified to see how this will turn out because surprises and hardened trained warriors don't mix well.
Ha ha ha no.
2876544 No you didn't.
And suddenly the house exploded.
the clop was awesome.
the word hear is supposed to be feel (you messed this up a few times)
great story so far sad too
good story im glad i stayed this long (is there a part 5 i smell)
3481774
That's just how the lyrics were, I didn't write it. But thanks for the like.
REACTION TO CLOP
before: this could get interesting
After: O_O DAYUM NMM is a freak in bed!!!
myfacewhen.net/uploads/3667-damn.jpg
3962231
I wanted to make her seem kinky, but only because it's Shadow. I'm glad somepony gave my something on that, I was worried I done screwed up.
3968175 Well let's just say you get a pat on the back, but for God's sake please tell me it ain't gonna happen to the other characters.
3972618
SWEET LUNA, NO!!!! Whether you mean in this story or the other stories my answer is still the same. Which is, 'Fuck you! I aiiiiiiiiiiiin't having that shit!'
3975079 Oh thank God
cdn1.goodmeme.net/store/user_photos/0/17/3069_praise_the_lord.._700.jpg
Just a quick reminder, Chapter 2 has been edited and I'd like to hear your thoughts on the fight.
I am terrified to see how this will turn out because surprises and hardened trained warriors don't mix well.