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dude, MOAR and thats brilliant about pinkie, thats absolutely brilliant, keep it up
edit: OMG im actually first this time! first first! ok im done, this wasnt as cool as i thought it was gonna b......
168219 Haha, Keep in mind most of this story is mapped out already. I wanted Pinkie to be a bit of an egomaniac, and also a character who enjoys just toying with everyone.
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i can totally see the toying with everyone extremely easily, the egomaniac, not so much. Also, Vinyl Scratch is really kind of a bitch, just saying
168233 Her ego is going to show more so later.
Also Vinyl is meant to be a bitch. Prejudice, arrogant, and violent.
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hmmmm, her fighting style intrigues me........and prejudiced how?
168276 Oh we're about to see Vinyl fight, and she is certainly... unique.
And you'll see her prejudices come out more soon.
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Excellent, can't wait. I do need to restate this, you write very, very well, i have a friend IRL who has published books, and this is on par with her work, so very good. Please, more.
This is what I get for 3 days away from the internet!
Another great chapter, Mist. I can't wait for the thickening.
I just struggled a bit with Pinkamena's super-sanity. She seems almost too knowing of the world around her for someone who let a persona take her place for... a long time. Like a non-malevolent version of the 90's-00's Joker.
Not to mention that she seems to know herself almost completely. But I guess that's understandable; being so much in contact with everything that makes her her.
But what nibbed me was the fact that she... kind of explains herself to Flare too much. Although I know that this is intended.
Wow... one thing that just now crossed my mind: Will we be seeing more of Flare's little sis?
168636 Well it's made quite clear in The Factory Saga that Pinkie sees Flare as an ally, and someone she can trust. Perhaps the closest thing to affection at this point, so I'd say it's pretty plausible that she opens up to him.
Also, where did Flare's sister come from? XD
168720 Now you really got me wondering about what is going on in Skyvale and why it wasn't [initially?] attacked.
A shame really, all these human in Equestria fics (guilty), are getting all of the views and this gem is left to sit unloved. I really liked the characterization of Pinkie, nice dark and comepletely fucked up. Like me. Anyway, the overall story arc is progressing nicely and how you're subtly changing Flare as you go along is some of the best work I've seen of the like in a very long time, borderline professional. How the mane six interact and how they've changed is nothing short of awe inspiring, all kept within realistic bounadries yet interesting nonetheless. (Still shocked that RD cut her own wing off, very well done.)
Now the only thing I've seen that needs to be looked over again is the actual part where Pinkie starts fucking with the cake family, I'd love to see a more overarching thing with that.
TL;DR: Stop and I'll rip your scrotum off.
Squeeee an update! Fantastic word as usual, I quite enjoy the characterization you've given Pinkamena and frankly, I really like the whole arrogant Vinyl thing you've got going, and I'm quite interested to see how she develops
180251 I have a lot of fun writing for Pinkie Pie. She's a social pariah, and a borderline psychopath, and I fucking love it.
Great story. it