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Let's just hope Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, and Applejack's characters develop in this arc. The story itself is wonderful, but those three characters kind of feel invisible half of the time. I mean, is Pinkie Pie still a minor? Are Fluttershy or Applejack dating anypony? We don't exactly have enough information to know.
7815471 Seeing as the Crusaders are adults now, Pinkie's obviously been an adult. She and Jacob were already established as a thing. The last act ended with Fluttershy and Blue Streak agreeing on a date, and Applejack is a background pony.
Just kidding. She's still the workaholic that is too busy with the farm to actually look for love. Besides, right now, her heart belongs to a mercenary from Tigeria.
7815525 Well, slash looks more like this, but without the yellow and more pronounced claws; buyourobot.com/file/edd/2015/07/00353_panther_thumb.jpg Where Ymir looks kind of like this, but with slightly more head armor; s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/236x/07/f6/57/07f657f42467bdf60463b6971c4457dc.jpg And Wingnut is kind like this, but more bat-like and no wannabe Tenno; wallpaperup.com/uploads/wallpapers/2013/07/02/112684/b2e4e877785d920a1d45bef95fc3091c.jpg
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Ah. I see.
Only thing I really have to say is that I feel as if there should be more chapters added in for certain things. I mean, if I was becoming an adult, I'd probably through a party or something, and I'm not nearly as a fanatic for parties as Pinkie is. Now, I'm not saying you should've had parties each time a pony became an adult or anything. Yet just a slight mention would help new readers like me realize that they've aged since the last arc of two.
7816332 I try not to just outright say stuff like that, instead letting events in the story show you. For example, Sweetie and Spike's wedding shows they are both of age, or Twilight agreeing to give Applebloom a chance.