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Spike the lightweight playa!
But srs, you'd think he'd secretly use that all seeing rune to look at others cards.
4253240 It can only be used on willing subjects. I doubt any of them would be willing to let him see through their eyes.
During the introductions, you should have said who said what.
“Hello,” The medical name said.
“How's it goin'?” Blue Streak said with a curt nod.
Midnight continued, “Finally, this is Virgil Silverpaw, Rarity's husband.”
“Charmed.” some bow or what not.
“Guys, this is my little brother, Jacob,” Midnight finished the introductions.
“Sup,” he replies with a slight wave.
Just a thought. Oh underlined a random typo.
Great story though, I'm loving this.
A good chapter. You are building up the story nicely. Keep up the good work.
Dragonfox
I laugh.
4253632 But, as you've just shown, it's not necessary. Anyone who's following can easily tell who's saying what just by how it's said. Like this, I feel it flows better and reenforces the casual nature.
4253638 Thanks
4253718 I'm glad you liked it
Oh god this story is too damned good and funny as hellb keep itb going!!!
4254178 Oh, it'll be going for a long time. I haven't even introduced the main antagonist yet.
4253596 They are drunk, correct? I would think the mental barriers would be lowered. Especially for the lightweight card counting playa.
4254370 No, just Spike. And you shouldn't call him a lightweight, that was Granny Smith's moonshine.
4254381 Is Granny's moonshine high test or 99.7% ethyl?
4254826 about 70% alcohol, but enhanced with earth pony magic.
4254929 So it might as well be straight alcohol right? With the added effect of the magic...
4255125 Except without the death
4255315 Almost goes w/o saying, but I'm an inexperienced drinker
4256921 Granny Smiths Black Label put Berry Punch out on her plot in three shots...u think u have a chance?
4266022 In a word? NO.
4267565 In two words; Hell no!
4268029 Ha ha, yeah... I'd probably be able to down 1 before I was blitzed, 2 and I'd be on my ass going downhill fast.
>>Shirotora
Ah, very true.
This is a constant occurrence in a lot of fics I see. Guy turns up in Equestria.. Has a short or long adventure and then beds the ponies. What kind of culture are these characters from to allow them to make the dicision to engage in interspecies coitos (Sexual intercourse -Sex-). Tis silly in my opinion... Let alone even deciding in the first first hours or days?
I feel as though this is just as much a cliche as the on I used.
4266022 Three words: Hell fucking NO!
5020728 Some people don't care so much about outward appearance, and thus wouldn't take years to get past that. That being said, however, it's still engrained in our minds that relations with non-humans is wrong, so I would estimate that less than 1% of people could look past it in less than three months. Midnight is from a world where there are races other than human, so I would guess that, despite the human-like appearance of said races, it would be a little easier to accept. Also, being turned into a pony might alter one's perspective enough to speed the process. After all, they're no longer a different species.
For the most part, I agree, though. Way too many fics have a relationship between a human/former human and a pony in less than a month. Hell, relationships between two humans take longer than some of the stories I've read.
4268029 y did celestia immediately. make me think of her and bananas after she mentioned biting him?