Changelings need love to live, and they rely on their mother to provide. When Queen Chrysalis is captured and brought to Canterlot, all she can think and worry about is if her young ones are safe, or possibly already dead.
I reckon they typed this out at their leisure and published it when they were done. I also noticed the chapters are done around no more than 1.2k words give or take, so this should be one quick fic if they keep up at this pace.
One minor nick pick. Supposedly they fired an arrow to take her in alive but... You probably should have gone with the ball of fire over the arrow.
Arrows, especially aimed at the torso, are pretty damn lethal. There's a reason we had been using them for so long, they kill people. If you wanted to take someone in alive shooting an arrow directly into their hide is literally the last thing they should do, if the arrow had gone into the wing instead it probably would have been a more believable maneuver.
Regardless, I'm liking this story thus far. Keep it up.
Really? Part 3 already?
What, did you have all of this done before hand? Not a complaint, mind you.
~Skeeter The Lurker
I reckon they typed this out at their leisure and published it when they were done. I also noticed the chapters are done around no more than 1.2k words give or take, so this should be one quick fic if they keep up at this pace.
Gratz on getting featured.
One minor nick pick. Supposedly they fired an arrow to take her in alive but... You probably should have gone with the ball of fire over the arrow.
Arrows, especially aimed at the torso, are pretty damn lethal. There's a reason we had been using them for so long, they kill people. If you wanted to take someone in alive shooting an arrow directly into their hide is literally the last thing they should do, if the arrow had gone into the wing instead it probably would have been a more believable maneuver.
Regardless, I'm liking this story thus far. Keep it up.
May you burn to death in the deepest of the Earth's crust.
I care not for your lives~. End them~
End them~
End them.
I shall read on~
EDIT: Oh dear...
may you kill all those guards i shall READ ON
Wow, bastards... I hour they are murdered most viciously.
Cya
Raziel-chan