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Too late.

Good chapter and story so far but not into lesbians.

Your doin good work bro. Keep it up

The writing so far is really good. The clop is great, if a little vague. Things just happen without much detail sometimes.

The story seems to be fleshing out decently, though its definitely clop-centric, and seems to be pushed to the side more often than not. (though whatever, this is a clopfic)

and ignore Rubakor. It needs more lesbians.

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I take it that the previous chapter didn't explain reason behind Cloudchaser's actions? Sorry about that. lol

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That's not what I meant. It was a fine explanation, don't worry so much.

..........Damn, i should have read this sooner. This is a dayum-fine story.

Cloud-chaser. Thunder-lane. These are characters i don't know. These are characters i've never read about or don't really recall seeing in the series.

These are characters you made me care about with this fic. I actually want to go look up their bios now to find out more about them and i am certainly enjoying seeing the antics they get up to in this fic. I'm looking forward to more of the great sexuality, romance, and humor presented thus far in this story

Most excellent.

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I am surprised that you never heard of those characters. But I am glad that you're enjoying it~

This is a great read and I thought your previous chapter was just as great :) keep up the good work! :D

Really great work man! Looking forward to more!

That was hot; that was very hot. I kinda like seeing Spitfire as a dom. She plays that part well. Now it looks like poor ol' Cloudchaser is being substituted in for Dash in Soarin's little make up thing.

~SolidFire

“But if you did that to me, I think that ‘it’ would have been over…” Thunderlane remarked.

I'm with him here.