Rainbow Dash feels that she's not being appreciated for her talents...and neither does Thunderlane.
Cloudchaser look mad! Awesome!
First chapter was pretty good! There were a bunch of grammatical errors that made me stop and think for a minute though. See if you can work those out. Overall pretty decent so far. Any idea how long you're going to make this?
OH DAYYUM CLOUDCHASER GON KICK SOME RAINBOW ASS. no but please dont i love this pairing
CC spies some sex, I like that. Now there needs to be a threesome between them. I'll be finishing this up either tomor... today or Sunday. Can't wait!
~SolidFire
Hmm cliffhanger
However, Thunderlane managed to stop her. “Rainbow Dash-” he grasped her body firmly.
Let me put it this way. RAINBOW DASH, wants to have sex with you. You really wanna say no?
Rainbow Dash blushed when he said that. “Why do all you guys ALWAYS say that??”
Hell if I know.
Cloudchaser held her clenched fist close against her chest as she heard Rainbow Dash moaning loudly with Thunderlane’s big meat in her mouth...
Oh dear.
Thunderlane le gentlecolt idéal !!!
Cloudchaser look mad! Awesome!
First chapter was pretty good! There were a bunch of grammatical errors that made me stop and think for a minute though. See if you can work those out. Overall pretty decent so far. Any idea how long you're going to make this?
OH DAYYUM CLOUDCHASER GON KICK SOME RAINBOW ASS. no but please dont i love this pairing
CC spies some sex, I like that. Now there needs to be a threesome between them. I'll be finishing this up either tomor... today or Sunday. Can't wait!
~SolidFire
Hmm cliffhanger
Let me put it this way. RAINBOW DASH, wants to have sex with you. You really wanna say no?
Hell if I know.
Oh dear.
Thunderlane le gentlecolt idéal !!!