You seemed a little mixed up about Sweetie Belle's color scheme, at one point you say she has a pinkish- grey mane. Her mane is light purple and pink, no gray in it at all. You also at one point say "The Purple unicorn" when she is white, not purple. Just thought I'd let you know.
Applejack steps in front of you. „You have covered...
How did that quotation mark fall to the floor?
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OH MY GOSH ITS AN APOCALYPSE OF FALLING QUOTATION MARKS WE'RE GONNA BE CRUS-*thud*
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There's no frigging purple unicorns in the CMC.
I do Like this.
ok this is getting good
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You seemed a little mixed up about Sweetie Belle's color scheme, at one point you say she has a pinkish- grey mane. Her mane is light purple and pink, no gray in it at all. You also at one point say "The Purple unicorn" when she is white, not purple.
Just thought I'd let you know.
Applejack's dialogue seems out of character in this chapter--she sounds more like Rarity.
I don't giggle I chuckle