After an unusual reconciliation, Trixie and Twilight hope to build a new relationship – but will Twilight's friends accept the now-"Humble and Repentant Trixie"? Or will they have to resort to drastic measures to protect their ne
Wow, this was just wow. I love Rarity playing a dominating role but this took it to a whole new level. You two have really perfected the use of clop as a story enhancer too, as hot as the action was it didn't detract at all from the overarching theme. Just made it better. Now I am both looking forward to and apprehensive about Rainbow Dash's chapter. This story has done such a fantastic job at keeping everypony in character that I can't help but feel the switching was the easiest punishment on Trixie's list. Really looking forward to more of this guys, and in the meantime I'm going to do whatever I can to get this fic more of the attention it deserves.
3178851 Ha! Thanks for that, I'm glad you're enjoying the ride so far. I've always kind of figured that out of all of the Mane Six, Rarity would be the most likely to have some really interesting kinkiness bubbling just under the surface of that oh-so-perfectly-proper exterior; she just seems the type that would be a dirty little mare behind closed doors.
As for using clop as a story enhancer -- thanks for that, as well. To me, the best clop stories are the ones that have story, as well as clop; a sex scene is always better, I think, when there's an emotional investment in the characters' situations and we actually get to learn something interesting about them and their relationships. Otherwise, it's just a lot of repetitious descriptions of "insert tab A into slot B".
Dash's chapter is coming along nicely; it's possible that it might be ready to go as soon as the coming weekend. We'll see. In the meantime, I hope you'll check out our other story, "The Many Uses of a Brush", if you haven't already; a fair bit of the backstory behind Twilight and Trixie's new relationship is in chapters 5 and 6 ("Tracing Lines" and "Turnabout's Fireplay"), and Dash's chapter is going to reference back to chapter 4 ("Chicken Butt") a little. (You don't necessarily have to read them to know what's going on, but they do help fill in the background.)
I... Personally I hate rarity now and if i was Trixie I would NOT deal with this.... Not that it isn't a good story, I'm just saying. I mean.... Come on.....
Eh. Gotta admit I love this fic, but not this chapter. I hate the idea of someone being punished in someone else's place even if Trixie DID stand up for Twilight.
Wow, this was just wow. I love Rarity playing a dominating role but this took it to a whole new level. You two have really perfected the use of clop as a story enhancer too, as hot as the action was it didn't detract at all from the overarching theme. Just made it better. Now I am both looking forward to and apprehensive about Rainbow Dash's chapter. This story has done such a fantastic job at keeping everypony in character that I can't help but feel the switching was the easiest punishment on Trixie's list. Really looking forward to more of this guys, and in the meantime I'm going to do whatever I can to get this fic more of the attention it deserves.
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Ha! Thanks for that, I'm glad you're enjoying the ride so far. I've always kind of figured that out of all of the Mane Six, Rarity would be the most likely to have some really interesting kinkiness bubbling just under the surface of that oh-so-perfectly-proper exterior; she just seems the type that would be a dirty little mare behind closed doors.
As for using clop as a story enhancer -- thanks for that, as well. To me, the best clop stories are the ones that have story, as well as clop; a sex scene is always better, I think, when there's an emotional investment in the characters' situations and we actually get to learn something interesting about them and their relationships. Otherwise, it's just a lot of repetitious descriptions of "insert tab A into slot B".
Dash's chapter is coming along nicely; it's possible that it might be ready to go as soon as the coming weekend. We'll see. In the meantime, I hope you'll check out our other story, "The Many Uses of a Brush", if you haven't already; a fair bit of the backstory behind Twilight and Trixie's new relationship is in chapters 5 and 6 ("Tracing Lines" and "Turnabout's Fireplay"), and Dash's chapter is going to reference back to chapter 4 ("Chicken Butt") a little. (You don't necessarily have to read them to know what's going on, but they do help fill in the background.)
despite the fact that most of the story is clop it still comes accross as plot with clop(and plot the other kind)
i love it
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I... Personally I hate rarity now and if i was Trixie I would NOT deal with this.... Not that it isn't a good story, I'm just saying. I mean.... Come on.....
People rarerly mention how strong earth ponies are. Nice touch.
Eh. Gotta admit I love this fic, but not this chapter. I hate the idea of someone being punished in someone else's place even if Trixie DID stand up for Twilight.