After an unusual reconciliation, Trixie and Twilight hope to build a new relationship – but will Twilight's friends accept the now-"Humble and Repentant Trixie"? Or will they have to resort to drastic measures to protect their ne
Thanks for the compliment. Wish I could say the next chapter is coming along well but I've hit a bit of a writer's block. Though the last chapter of "Many Uses of a Brush" should be out shortly.
For a first attempt this is... as close to perfect as i've ever seen. Your writing's good, I saw no obvious spelling or grammatical errors, nor any punctuation problems.
2910983 That's because I'm an obsessive perfectionist who sweats every single keystroke. Obviously, Twilight Sparkle and I share certain OCD tendencies. Glad you like it so far!
Chapter 2 is in progress; I'm still juggling some ideas to keep the spanking scenes from getting repetitive or predictable, which is always a hazard in this kind of story. (Though I imagine Trixie won't appreciate the results nearly as much as the readers will. )
Very nice.
I normally don't like the "punishment" kind of thing but I very much enjoyed this.
Can't wait for more.
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Thanks for the compliment. Wish I could say the next chapter is coming along well but I've hit a bit of a writer's block. Though the last chapter of "Many Uses of a Brush" should be out shortly.
For a first attempt this is... as close to perfect as i've ever seen. Your writing's good, I saw no obvious spelling or grammatical errors, nor any punctuation problems.
Liked and Faved, hope too see more soon
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That's because I'm an obsessive perfectionist who sweats every single keystroke. Obviously, Twilight Sparkle and I share certain OCD tendencies. Glad you like it so far!
Chapter 2 is in progress; I'm still juggling some ideas to keep the spanking scenes from getting repetitive or predictable, which is always a hazard in this kind of story. (Though I imagine Trixie won't appreciate the results nearly as much as the readers will. )
...well, that was...wow.
YOU HAVE A NEW FOLLOWER.