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"h-hello?" Fluttershy said frightened
then one of the guards replied to her "are you Mrs Fluttershy?" he said bravely
even more frightened she said "y-yes I am w-why d-do you ask? I-if you don't mind that is"
the other man replied "you don't know about what happen earlier on?" fluttershy quietly said a no. She overheard one of the guards asked the other guard if he really was sure if she was her or not and the guard just nodded, then the guard spoke again
"Anyway I have an Important letter for you from Princess Celestia and I might as well tell you what happened today, well a murder has took place at the spa and um well how do I explain this and YOU are you blame."
shocked at what the guard had just told her, she took the letter out of his hooves and started reading the letter she had been given, it said...
Dear Fluttershy
I am very disappointed with you lately, as you have murdered one of my dearest friends Chrysalis. As for your punishment, I shall banish you from Equestria forever, and yes you should be ashamed of yourself for doing such a thing, you have to be gone by sunset in three days from now and I will make sure that you are. Also there is one thing you will need to know before you go, is that your element WILL be taken from you and replaced, the other is that you will no longer have a cutie mark as such so this is my goodbye fluttershy.
Goodbye
Princess Clestia
By now there were tears flowing down her eyes, she asked the guards to leave and she also noticed that there were tears down there eyes as they left, but she just still didn't believe it fluttershy...banished...forever? those three words were zooming around her head, in the end she had passed out.
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No! How could she banish Fluttershy and take away her cutie mark and element!
2648192 your welcome
2654637
Is that a bad thing?
how could flutter do it!!!?? celestia is a fucking tyrant!!! flutter wouldn't hurt a fly!!!
2653696 fuck you dude!!! this story is golden!!! I fucking despise people like who think people are gonna hate on a story cause of a few misplaced words. the author from what I see is trying to construct an interesting plot line and yet you have the nerve to shoot it down as well!!! maybe it don't make sense to you but the key word is FICTION not NON-FICTION!!! usually I would of let your criticism go as its your opinion but... and this is where you pissed me off... you continued to fucking flame the poor person. heres a lesson to you dude... if you cant read a story without being a fucking prick with your criticism... DONT READ THE FUCKING STORY!!!!
2656256 hey I loved your story. don't let assholes like pendrake 72 keep you from finishing this... I will be with you every step of the way
2648854
thanks for your help I will try and do better!
2666516>>2666516 no need to do better your story is flawless!! pendrake is an asshole nothing more it was my pleasure to get him off your case. I cant wait for the next chapter. if you ever need me to lend you a hoof, weather it be incite on what to do next in the story or whatever. feel free to message me ok good luck with everything I know you will blow me away