A sixteen year old kid is hunted and shot, left for dead in a forest next to a small town, when suddenly six young, beautiful girls appear from nowhere and helps him. Now he awakes in a strange land, surrounded by anthropomorphized ponies. OC HiE.
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3421302 That face... It scares me...
3421325 Is that saying how bad the chapter was?
Raped by Gryphons... why I am not surprised?
3421332 It's only going to get worse as the story continues. Later on of course. ~~SPOILER~~ He breaks out next chapter.
3421340 A question, he got PROTOTYPE powers, right? why he not just consume her and stuff?
3421354 He's skeptical of his powers. He only received them but didn't know how to use them besides the transformations and his superhuman powers.
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nope it means the situation is going to be chaotically neutral
im at the edge of my seat right now hehehhehehehehhehhheeehehdeheehhdehehehhehehhehehhhehhvery good chapter
3422617 Same here.
Good chapter.
Heh... Now only if I could start writing again...
I'm trying to work on a Pokémon fic currently... But its failing... Can you give me any ideas on how to get inspiration or something? (I've tried music, but I've listened to mine too much, and I can't get squat from it...)
why hasn't he killed them yet
Nice work. Better than me. If you want to see my story, I'll have it uploaded within the next week so you guys can see it.
Anyways, nice job. I did notice a few gramatical errors, though, but they're ones I see professionals fuck up
3423048 English is my third language, so it's going to be full of grammar issues.
you know i was kind of hoping he bit her tongue off.
3423122 I thought about that, but I wanted Danny to stay chaotic neutral all the way. I really wanted to make him bite her tongue off, but at the same time, I've seen a few fanfics where they've done that and they just get stomped on by giant fucking guards that come out of the shadows seemingly.
chaotic neutral all they way YEEEEEEAAAHHH BBBBBBOOOOOOOOOOOOIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
3425993 My sense of chaotic neutral, that Daniel keeps a level head in a tense situation and sees both sides point of view and decides fairly, but can cause major damage to everyone around him, even the alicorns of the world. Now if that's not anywhere near what chaotic neutral people are supposed to be, then I don't really care.
3421302 i see you creepy and raise it by moar creepy
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3442534 They wouldnt let him in, he'd annoy them to much, starve them, AND break the fourth wall outta there
3422999
The griffons are still holding the other ponies captive. If he makes a move on the griffons, then word will spread quickly and the ponies will all be executed. He doesn't want there deaths on his hands.
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What's your first language?
this is not good
Hey Marine. Long time so see....well its only been a few weeks but you know i mean. So how's your story writing going so far?
3451967 Slowly but surely. I've been busy with school, RPs, and video games. TF2 ftw.
3453677 I know how that feels. XD Well back to finishing my story. I'm pushing it to get it done and start posting by the end of this week. 10,000 words is just so much to edit....
3453704 Eeyup.
3457276 I think so. He quoted one time before.
This is a great story! But I have to wonder why daniel is even putting up with all the crap the world keeps throwing at him. By all rights he is essentially invincible and unstoppable. Escape should be easy. Hmm, questions to ponder
All in all very entertaining please update soon!
3466649 Maybe he's holding off so he can have sex with that griffon chick.
Daniel you sly dog.
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Guys have you noticed Daniel is taking all this shit when he can shape shift and slaughter all of them in mere seconds.
I finally found a use for those two gifs and images of my reaction for this entire story!
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Hope you have him shapeshift and slaughter the griffon trying to rape him. Then secure Violet, get her to safety, and proceed to slaughter any and all griffons between him and the King.
man the anticipation is killing me
Main character: Careful gryphon, don't impale yourself....
Gryphoness torturess: Isn't that the - !!!
(MC impales gryphoness through her hoo-hah with his bits-turned-spear, causing the entire spear to slice through everything on its way to blasting out of her skull.... He then proceeds to absorb the feline-avian thing, just for the sake of another form to take on - much to the surprise and/or horror of the pony captives in the room and the gryphons watching from out of the room.)
MC: (shifts into Gryphoness' ex-body to test it out, oozing through his-turned-her bonds in the process.) Point? Yes, in more ways than one.....
Just something that I had thought of when I read the chapter not even an hour after you uploaded it, and have been holding onto since.... if he can absorb and manipulate all of his body, couldn't he do that with his thing, along with absorbing her body and/or being able to replicate it in the first place? Heck, couldn't he make himself a she if he ever so wished, being the pseudo-amorphous blob that he can be if he chooses to be? I find it may be humorous to see your human champion return to Equestrian borders suited in the armor, only to reveal themself to be a female Gryphon? And what would the bed-life be like with this ability to change anything and everything about him on a whim? Oh, the possibilities....
3919341 Your decision on reading it. I'm not going to force you. I've just been too busy with school, jobs, YouTube, and everything else to really write.
MORE FUCKING CHAPTERS NOW
are you die or you give up?
4188993 I just dealt with a concussion and a coma for about three weeks. I'm getting my life back on track, and I'll be back to writing in little less than a month.
On a side note, I believe I have enough knowledge from my English classes to build my sentences more, as well as pay attention to details more often. I can sort out a quick rough draft for all of you to read, which will not be the final copy, so to see if any of you enjoy the new writing style.