A sixteen year old kid is hunted and shot, left for dead in a forest next to a small town, when suddenly six young, beautiful girls appear from nowhere and helps him. Now he awakes in a strange land, surrounded by anthropomorphized ponies. OC HiE.
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3324860 Ready are we? It will have to begin tomorrow.
yay!
and its heavy clop!
3324866 It won't be JUST Fluttershy and Pinkie! Can you guess how many mares will walk in on this and start rutting him senseless?
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a lot....?
and any more join his harem? after this?
3324880 A lot, and more will join.
Bout damn time
3325411 Then it turns out that he has to go fight dragons or something and he doesn't get some.
3325424 or one of my brothers pop in inexplicably after a heavy wind blows in, kneeling on both his knees, arms resting on his extremely large sword shaped like a cross.
3325664 Or Sora from Kingdom Hearts just pops up and he has to fight the Heartless.
dude first of all... this is the weirdest shit i have read in a looooong time (all in good mood), secondly... you are awersome!! thirdly... i almost didnt recognize your avatar (go SCII!!!) and fourthly... if you play add me
3325686 Molestia arrives on the planet and tries raping Celestia and Luna, then moved to Daniel.
YYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FINALY SOME HEAVY SEX!!!the stash approves 100%and exlante chapter
3326435 And then I don't update until January.
so octy and viynl join the harem who's next
3327011NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
3327647 Not yet... But soon... There will be more...
3327726 Joking of course.
3328174should've known
3328372 Problem is that I'm going to be very busy and I won't be able to write for at least a week, if not longer. Kind of sucks, but school is a bastard.
3328379tell me about it, i was pulled out 'cauoe of the teachers threw away my turned in homework and the grade i was in was 6th grade
3328400 Being a senior sucks when you're trying to keep school and personal life separated.
3328403it not easy
Dude. I feel you on the senior deal. But hey! At least we get to push the lower grades around!
3329111not cool man you need to set good example not a bad one
i don't mind
So after this strange gryphon arc, I guess there will be no more problems at all. Because I'm starting to wonder whatever happened to that mafia that brought him here in the first place.
I hope he doesn't crush them with heavier than a car weight or crush them with his stronger than a whale muscle mass... Actually he's also just single part now as black light is one virus and makes its carriers a single mass of flesh in whatever shape they choose
3346305 The Blacklight virus doesn't require him to eat biomass, but he can and it will increase his power. He still feels drowsiness and hunger, but he can outlast most humans and ponies. Its kind of like vampires from Cirque Du Freak, but he doesn't need blood or biomass. Also, using the gun and armor instead of the powers because he's self conscious of his powers. The dispenser and gun removes the need to get into the middle of the battle with his weapons. Even if the dispenser is destroyed and the gun runs out of ammo, he still has the bow and arrow, with a ridiculous amount of arrows to use. If he runs out of arrows to use, then he can use the swords. If the swords are broken, then he might use the virus, but it will take him a while even make that decision.
3336932 I won't spoil it, but the gryphons were... convinced to attack Canterlot. The mafia is going to make a comeback soon.
3346966
Oh so they are making it back, I wonder if they gained powers in this world as well or did they bring their guns here.
Ahh, the gods of clop have finally praised their answer unto this story! Mead and Ale for everyone; for tonight, we dine in joyous feasting!
And when the mafia comes, it'll be the night to dine in hell....
In their case....
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I'm going to make a guess and say that the gryphons made a deal with the mafia, or the other way around, and them attacking canterlot was one of the conditions, if only to get at Daniel.
3349799 Oh I think I can make them suffer just slightly by the hands of Daniel when we reach that point. *Evil laugh*
3349939 *Pulls out a large knife.* You know too much... We're going to have to kill you...
3347400 Or maybe both...?
3346957 he's still heavier than a car and basically god like but I'll keep reading XD I like complaining XD
no clop and a crazy story that involves the guy literary going into other games....util you decide to put clop here, I'm gone, but being the nice guy i am, I'm giving the story a thumbs up.
3356473 I don't remember in the game that they said that Alex or James weighed as much as a car or anything. But yeah, he kind of is a god unless he goes up against a true god... *writes down idea.*
3356503 What's with all the comments and the next chapter is going to have nothing but clop (I WILL MAKE IT FULL CLOP) so don't worry your damn head off.
ok....good to know. but seriously marine. I really, REALLY had a tough time reading the story after chapter 10 or so where Daniel is going to different places (i think he even went to skyrim and other crazy stuff that made it harder to follow) and dimensions and such. Good story but just way too much stuff jamed into it for me to keep track of. saying my face wasn't something like this -> <- while reading the story would be a lie.
3357712 I meant for it to be a little confusing while packing as much action as I can onto this ride. I just need to work on the chapter more and I'll have it up soon.
3357713 Talking about the iPod? Twilight put some sort of spell on it to keep it infinitely charged. Pretty handy for keeping one sane in a world without technology.
*sweatdrops* ok....so its meant to be confusing.... well then. i wish you made it less confusing. It would make the story sooo much better. i mean look at fluttershy here. -> <- your confusing story made her cry. XD Well the story isn't that bad but you get my point.
3357756 It wasn't that confusing. But that's beside the point. Daniel is almost super powerful god that can take on Celestia herself and win with the exception that she has magic while Daniel doesn't really know about his. If he learned how to control it, then this bastard can do some serious damage. (Insert countless list of spells from countless different games.)
i'm kinda 'meh' on him being that strong and also Celestia being portrayed as an uber powerful goddess.........or probably i'm saying that cause I read way too many fedominist based stories where the ponies rape said human. In a sense coming from a world where magic is non existent and being a person living in that world coming to a world where magic is predominant, he should or possibly be highly immune most magic. Seeing if the world he lived in no magic was present, you could theorize that magic is either extremely weak in that world or dimension or perhaps the inhabitants are resistant to its effects therefore the total lack of magic on earth and hence how a human who happens to be in Equestria is not affected by the ponies' magic. As for the living conditions and rights in Equestria, its pretty safe to say the ratio of mare to stallion is somewhere around 8/2 or even more which could produce a female favored society where the stallions have very little rights. And 99% of all stories involving humans here is usually male. Since said laws are meant for the mares and stallions, a human (despite his is male) should be considered null and void in his case. However they most likely will over look his species and treat him as any other stallion would be treated. While not all stories follow this kind of scenario, when they do it infuriates me to no end. They're ponies, guy is a freaken human, he should be the one strong enough to push them around but their ignorance clouds their minds to actually see his case. But all of the sudden when said human happens to be a badass, example: Soldier, a fucking badass Marine, or the elite of the elite, Navy Seals. When that happens said ponies have a tough time pushing the human around since one, he's actually trained and can kill them with little ease, and two, The aren't going to let colorful ponies tell them what to do even if they can control the sun or moon. And since magic doesn't work on them, the ponies are in for a hellava ride. I would love to see a story where a Marine or Navy Seal gets teleported to Equestria and how they react. XD I'd be epic I say.
3357890 I don't really see Celestia as an uber powerful goddess, but if she has the power to move the sun, then you have to give her some credit. While it may be true for humans to be resistant to almost immune to magic, Daniel has been living in Equestria for two years now, his body has grown accustomed to the magic, and his travel to Skyrim gave him a ring that can absorb magicka, which gives him the ability to use magic. He was able to absorb enough magicka from Molestia that his body exerted that energy through a magical explosion that blasted him into the Starcraft universe. While I have seen some ratios that were a bit small (1/4, 1/3 around that.), I have also seen a few that were completely ridiculous. (1/123. I mean seriously?! One hundred and twenty three mares to one stallion?!) But Daniel was made into a badass. At first, he was some scrawny sixteen year old kid. Now, he's some buff ass space marine that has superhuman powers, an arsenal of weapons to use, armor that can't be touched by even the strongest weapons in Equestria (Spears and swords can't really do shit against him.). I see no reason why the ponies don't fear him, but I'll find a way to make them fear him... Oh yes... The ponies will fear Daniel before the end...
Well I'll be. I didn't actually think you would reply back with a super long comment of your own. yeah i'll give him credit he's badass now, BUT he wasn't badass to begin with....dahm now i gotta bad craving to read a story about the ponies and a Marine.
3358036 I'm not a complete asshole. I read all of the comments people make on my stories and reply to them as best as I could. But yeah, Daniel was not a badass from the beginning. From the HiE stories I've read, most of them have a human that never gets some sort of superpower or gets a small one that doesn't really change the tide of battle and he falls in love with a mare, maybe two or three. I've found a few MiE stories where it might be a marine, or an army soldier, even a few air force guys that go to Equestria and do their thing, with the ponies fearing them. I've only read one other story that actually has a human that starts out as a nobody with no special talents or powers, then he arrives in Equestria and half way through the story, he gets some sort of power that is extremely beneficial to the final battle and the story ends with him becoming stoned. While I didn't really wait for Daniel to get anything great, all of his resources will run out on smaller battles and he will eventually have nothing but his original greatsword, the blacklight virus, his armor, and magic. I plan a similar ending to the story itself, but I want to make a sequel as well.
hey now, i didn't mean to imply your an asshole. and sounds like Daniel has a lot to go through yet...........hmmmmm....now i feel like playing black ops 2 now.....what the heck, i like black ops 2. (conscience: but your only good at free-for-all you know?) Didn't i tell you to stop talking in my comments? (conscience: since when do i listen to you?) ......
3358128 Didn't say you were implying I was an asshole, but most writers who don't reply to comments in their stories are normally assholes in real life. I stopped playing CoD after Modern Warfare. World at War was enough for me.
I play it mostly to burn of some free time i have here and there.