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Chapter 2 is UP! Boom shaka laka.
*Sings SOns of Skyrim in glee*![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Finally, a story where the human ISN'T affected by the stare!
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Yep, hehe. "WHAT YOU LOOKIN' AT, WOMAN?!"
I like this story so far. Just one problem. Paragraphs. Use them more often, especially for speech.
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Noted. Damn iPods make it hard to do, and my bloody Microsoft word won't indent my paragraphs. Thanks for the constructive criticism.
Next chapter gonna have some interaction with-
Pinkie Pie: DON'T SPOIL IT!
Gah! Where the hell'd you come from?
214898 Ah. So your using an iPod. That explains it. I also know your pain. I type most of comments out on mine, and it's annoying as hell. I can only imagine how hard it is to type a full story out on one.
Really enjoying this so far but can you please break up your speech more?
It makes it hard to tell who is talking, and when they stop.
215816 Yurp. Maybe for huge conversations I'll do something like this:
Dylan: Wazzup!
PP: Pancakes!
Dylan: What are you-
Etcetera, etcetera.![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
Also, loving all the tracks and faves. I just wish more people would see this, I haven't even got to the good stuff yet.
I might change the rating to Mature, seeing as some of the ideas
I have in mind for the story are pretty DARK.
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That would make it a lot easier to follow, other than that, I love the idea of this story so far.
Can't wait for the next chapter, seeing as how this guy doesn't exactly seem to be an evil bearer of an element of disharmony.
Good day and have a mustache.
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Oh how wrong you are, my friend.
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The moustaches have been doubled!
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I have a feeling this may also be somewhat oh a long story, seeing as how I'm assuming there will be 6 bearers of the elemts of disharmony, an opposite for each that the mane 6 wield.
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Good GOD. Quadruple moustaches!
Yes, as the description says, six bearers for the big ol' evil side.
I'm going to make it long, as I don't think I can cover the epic scale that I want for this story in a small amount of chapters.
CHAPTER THREE IS GOING UP RIGHT NOW, FILLIES AND COLTS!
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(i almost never get to post moustache :(
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"Fuckfuckfuckfuckfuckgoosefuckfuckfuckfuckfuckfuckfiretruckfuckfuckfuckfuckfuckcanteloupesfuckfuckfuck! "
goose, firetruck, canteloupes?!?!
wait which lion king had the eat me thing I don't remember it anyway y must most people be better writers then me![:raritycry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritycry.png)
Huh,I found it amongst grimdark fanfics...but this looks different...Anyway,its great work,I will keep reading....
Wow, rereading this is worth it.
MEEEEEE GUSTA.
Heh heh isn't he naked still... oh man the embarrassment it will be excellent![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
With the way the ponys acted at the beginning there, if I were him at least 2 would not be there anymore.
That canteloupes part killed me. As did the goose part. Gg. No re.