I didn't forget about everyone, I'm trying to work on the next part and I am almost done with the next scene/chapter though may not be able to finish it until tomorrow at the latest. This week has been horrible with all of the doctor appointments on top of another stupid, petty argument between my mom and brother which is doing nothing but making everything more stressful and the tensions around her rise insanely. With all of that I've been extremely stressed and my head is killing me, my chest

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I already know who the big bad villian is going to be, but I am having trouble deciding on their personality. After a few comments I debated Sombra, though I think I am still going to go with an original character. The problem I am having is kind of making a stumbling black as this will effect some parts of the story though not a large amount. Just enough that I need to figure this out soon as it will effect upcoming chapters.

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I'm starting on the next chapter and should have it ready by the weekend at the latest if we get enough to replace the tire and rim on our van. Though I have a question about the story that would play a minor part in the story though would mostly be just mostly some fluff for this chapter between two characters. The fluff is going to happen, but I'm wondering if there should be hints at a possible romantic relationship between the two in the future to out right making them a pairing. It isn't

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I used an old space holder and the date didn't update so alerts may not have went out, sorry

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Good news to everyone waiting for a new chapter! I should have a new one ready to post tonight or late morning at the latest. I have most of it done. The only way it might me postponed until tomorrow night (which is the absolute latest) is if the gofundme page my brother decided to make in my name (just so he could make sure to keep his name from it) actually gets enough money to get the replacement tire and rim we need for our van and I have to go get it. We really need it as soon as possible

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So, to start off with I have been kind of reconnecting with two old, very good friends that want to go by our old names when I refer to them on here. K and D. We were a small group, mostly just the three of us with me going by N. I bet you can guess what one of our favorite cartoons from Cartoon Network was, if not, here's a hint: KND. Kids Next Door!

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I mentioned in a comment that I would be posting within a few days some news about what is going on in a blog, this blog to be exact. So yeah, I kind of have a new beta for A Whole New World, though they don't want to work on You Will Never Be Alone Again. While I do want to continue You Will Never Be Alone Again, even if I forsee a lot of problems with it that I didn't forsee when I first worked out the idea, I won't be canceling just yet. I may put You Will Never Be Alone Again an Hiatus for

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I really want to say I am sorry for my long hiatus from writing, my nerves have been too wracked to even attempt writing anything worth a crap to be frank. My brother's health has went to major shit this last year, and while I do find time to read during appointments sometimes or when I have some free time to myself, I just haven't been able to deal with trying to explain things or argue stuff.

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Sorry I haven't been around mush this week, I've had to go to several different doctors with my brother as well as a lot of other stuff going such as the holiday weekend and this entire week has just been super crazy. It is still going to be crazy until the middle of next week when I should have the next 2 chapters posted.

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I think I finally have a better grasp on the time it is taking me to do things. I thought things would go much quicker, but sadly they don't. On average it seems to be taking 3 to 4 days at the least to do a decent job on editing my chapters. And while it didn't take much time writing the original as I just let my muse flow and write what came to me, with the rewrite I'm having to do a lot more thinking which makes me take a lot longer to write it. So my writing time is taking maybe at least 2

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Never make plans because they hardly ever hold up to the real world. We have a lot of family over this weekend making it hard to get any editing done, but I am going to stay up late tonight and try and get some done. Just not sure if I will get the entire chapter done. I also plan to go back and tweak the Luna and Sunset scene just a bit with some of the things Dr-Fluffy suggested. I just want to wait until I get caught up with my current editing because honestly I just can't look at that scene

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As stated it is fixed up, hopefully for the final time as right now this is the happiest I have actually been with the scene.

Okay, I am nearly done with editing the next chapter and I should have it up at the latest by tomorrow morning. RIght now I'm just taking a break since it is a pain in the ass reading something like twenty times trying to figure out why something just doesn't sound right. Writer's have it hard writing something good, but editors have a hard job too as they have to make a writer's lump of coal into a diamond and sometimes that takes a lot of work. This chapter is one that is taking a lot of work

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So yeah I got a message from my editor today explaining what happened and I really hope for the best for them. I won't go into detail about what they said, it was probably most likely meant to be private, but they have a lot of crap to deal with in life right now so I'm not mad at them or anything. I do wish I got even a short reply sooner, but I understand that real life sucks at times and I hope for the best for them and will keep them in my prayers.

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So yeah, as the title suggests, the edited chapter 2 is now up. Mind you I did the editing myself so it may not be the greatest and I didn't know what to cut, if any, for sounding too dry since I was trying to explain the few things that I could fit in decently without completely clogging of the story flow. I will do my best to get the other 3 chapters that I have done finished editing and posted this weekend, but this chapter took a lot longer than I though it would so it may take me the rest

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So yeah, as the title says I am really frustrated right now. I have a toxic enough environment that I live in, but no matter where I turn online it seems every single community that was once peaceful and friendly, or should be so considering the subject matter, is turning toxic as well. That right that has been strangling my creativity a lot lately though I try my best to ignore it.

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I wanted to let everyone know that yes there are updates incoming so please don't panic. The next two chapters are actually now finished and awaiting editing so they will be published as soon as they are completed. I'm not the best writer, and I know that, so my editor has their work cut out for them.

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So yeah, as it says the Chapter 1 rewrite is done and posted with chapter 2 being about finished though being Mother's Day I won't be home for awhile so won't get much work done on it. I should have both Chapter 2 and 3 done by next weekend, I hope. The rewrites are much harder than I thought they were going to be and much larger to. Chapter 1 itself is longer than all 3 of the original chapters combined. I really wasn't planning on changing much, just patching the flow, but sadly plans never

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Ok, so you all probably know, I'm trying my best to use all the advice given to me for the story which prompted a rewrite of what I have. I'm currently at, say 90% of the way done with only another scene or two to do depending on where I stop chapter 1. I have a lot of ideas for the story and some of the advice from people have changed some of them and other advice has me rethinking some things. I could really use everyone's opinions on a few things to see what everyone would like to see more.

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A Whole New World Chapter 3 Commentary (Beware the spiders! I mean Spoilers!)

Really though, beware the spiders too.

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