A Whole New World Chapter 1 Rewrite Posted

So yeah, as it says the Chapter 1 rewrite is done and posted with chapter 2 being about finished though being Mother's Day I won't be home for awhile so won't get much work done on it. I should have both Chapter 2 and 3 done by next weekend, I hope. The rewrites are much harder than I thought they were going to be and much larger to. Chapter 1 itself is longer than all 3 of the original chapters combined. I really wasn't planning on changing much, just patching the flow, but sadly plans never go as intended and I rewrote it pretty much from scratch though kept a lot of the scenes if altered a bit as well as adding things.