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May
7th
2017

Hiatus, new story · 8:43am May 7th, 2017

Greetings everyone.

I have bad news for you all. Due to lack of editing assistance on "Ponyville's Tiny Librarian" I decided to put this story on Hiatus. I will return to this story at one point in the future once I'll find someone who can help me keep quality of the story on high level.


In the meanwhile, I decided to write a Pokemon/MLP crossover with two OC's that I always wanted to use, but didn't know how until now.

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Jun
10th
2016

Backstory of Twiny's guard Overwatch. The story is out. · 8:23pm Jun 10th, 2016

I know it was already mentioned in author notes, but for all who like Overwatch and Steel Blade and would like to read more about their backstory, here's link to my editor's story he just published.

In Sheep's Clothing

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May
29th
2016

Celestia's nightmare, I need your opinion · 6:56pm May 29th, 2016

Saying it simply, one of my editors suggested to delete this scene since most readers seems to get tired of the punishments, however some commented that they wanted to see Celestia having such nightmare base on books Luna was reading, so I am adding this blog to ask for your opinion.

Should I add this scene at the beggining of next chapter, or instead keep it here in blog and add link to this blog in author notes? Also, your advices and opinions are most welcome.

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May
15th
2016

Twiny's unintentional trick. · 12:56am May 15th, 2016

I just realized that Twilight jumping into Gilda's throat in chapter 5 part 2 and next teleporting outside is similar to trick Trixie performed in season 6 episode 6. (Instead of normal sized unicorn shoting herself into manticore's mouth and teleporting out, it was tiny sized unicorn jumping into griffon's stomach).

What do you guys think? Was this at least a bit similar?

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Apr
27th
2016

Chapter 4 part 3, Appelack hurting Twilight alternative ver 2 scene · 3:52pm Apr 27th, 2016

After the voting with 30 votes for alternative scene and 5 votes for the original, I've decided to use alternative instead. However, it was pointed out that Big Mac's reaction was to weak and between so I wrote up an update. Please look into the updated part and vote if it improve the alternative scenes. Feedback and suggestions are always welcome.


//This is the alternative scene without updating, I marked the part that I plan to change (also, I added AJ's hat falling from her head):

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