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  • 161 weeks
    Sweetolebob18 injury

    Sweetolebob18 was a top proof-reader of Tails or Innocence and Tails of Sacrefice. Two months ago, he had a car accident, and now he require 6500 $ for knee operation, which he can't affod.

    I can't afford to help myself, but if any of you is capable of assisting him in anyway, I am certain he will be most grateful.

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    2 comments · 1,174 views
  • 189 weeks
    Chapter 15 - Two small scene changes

    Hello everyone. Just wanted to inform you that based on feedback from "RebelRogue12" and with his help, I altered two scenes.

    It is nothing much, but thought I should inform you regardless. Added stuff is marked in bold:

    Scene one:

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    1 comments · 737 views
  • 190 weeks
    Scene change - Celestia's motivation - Feedback needed

    Hello all fans of this story. Due to high controversy regarding Celestia's actions and received feedback, I decided to expand on Celestia's scene to give better reasoning behind her actions.

    Sure, what she did is still a desperate and bold move, but I hope what I added will make it more understandeable and improve quality of the story.

    Added scene is marked in bold:

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  • 190 weeks
    Scene change - Kyuubi's injury - Feedback needed

    Hello everyone.

    Considering the feedback, I came to conclusion that the scene where Shining Armor injured Kyuubi seemed more harsh and more intentional than I intended, so I decided to add minor changes.
    Also, it was pointed out to me that tails don't bleed, so I decided to adress it as well.

    Here is the altered scene, changed as marked in bold:

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    6 comments · 333 views
  • 194 weeks
    I appologize for the delay in updating

    Greetings all readers and fans of "Tails of Innocence"

    I would like to appologize for this long delay in updating this story. There are two reasons behind it:
    1) Chapter 9 felt rushed to me and I had difficulty figuring out how to expand on it in a satisfying way, but I finally succeded. I can only hope it will be enough.

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May
15th
2016

Twiny's unintentional trick. · 12:56am May 15th, 2016

I just realized that Twilight jumping into Gilda's throat in chapter 5 part 2 and next teleporting outside is similar to trick Trixie performed in season 6 episode 6. (Instead of normal sized unicorn shoting herself into manticore's mouth and teleporting out, it was tiny sized unicorn jumping into griffon's stomach).

What do you guys think? Was this at least a bit similar?

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Comments ( 4 )

Did they steal it from you?

All that I thought when I saw the scene was "Wow, she's really jumping at the beak to prove herself."

Are they similar? Yes, they are. But the way creativity works now is that everything is inspired by something. There is nothing truly original anymore that can be told in a coherent storyline. The only things original now are the abstract stuff.

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Lol.
Joking aside. I wrote this chapter loooong time ago, so in terms of being eaten and teleported out, I was first and show second. Hehe.

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She's indeed.

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To be fair, the scene in the show is a reference to famour illusionist ( not sure how to spell his name ). I wrote chapter 5 long time ago so it wasn't inspired by the show, though I am surpriced that both scenes ended up so similar.

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