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  • 162 weeks
    Sweetolebob18 injury

    Sweetolebob18 was a top proof-reader of Tails or Innocence and Tails of Sacrefice. Two months ago, he had a car accident, and now he require 6500 $ for knee operation, which he can't affod.

    I can't afford to help myself, but if any of you is capable of assisting him in anyway, I am certain he will be most grateful.

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    2 comments · 1,178 views
  • 189 weeks
    Chapter 15 - Two small scene changes

    Hello everyone. Just wanted to inform you that based on feedback from "RebelRogue12" and with his help, I altered two scenes.

    It is nothing much, but thought I should inform you regardless. Added stuff is marked in bold:

    Scene one:

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    1 comments · 740 views
  • 190 weeks
    Scene change - Celestia's motivation - Feedback needed

    Hello all fans of this story. Due to high controversy regarding Celestia's actions and received feedback, I decided to expand on Celestia's scene to give better reasoning behind her actions.

    Sure, what she did is still a desperate and bold move, but I hope what I added will make it more understandeable and improve quality of the story.

    Added scene is marked in bold:

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    4 comments · 453 views
  • 190 weeks
    Scene change - Kyuubi's injury - Feedback needed

    Hello everyone.

    Considering the feedback, I came to conclusion that the scene where Shining Armor injured Kyuubi seemed more harsh and more intentional than I intended, so I decided to add minor changes.
    Also, it was pointed out to me that tails don't bleed, so I decided to adress it as well.

    Here is the altered scene, changed as marked in bold:

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    6 comments · 334 views
  • 195 weeks
    I appologize for the delay in updating

    Greetings all readers and fans of "Tails of Innocence"

    I would like to appologize for this long delay in updating this story. There are two reasons behind it:
    1) Chapter 9 felt rushed to me and I had difficulty figuring out how to expand on it in a satisfying way, but I finally succeded. I can only hope it will be enough.

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May
7th
2017

Hiatus, new story · 8:43am May 7th, 2017

Greetings everyone.

I have bad news for you all. Due to lack of editing assistance on "Ponyville's Tiny Librarian" I decided to put this story on Hiatus. I will return to this story at one point in the future once I'll find someone who can help me keep quality of the story on high level.


In the meanwhile, I decided to write a Pokemon/MLP crossover with two OC's that I always wanted to use, but didn't know how until now.

In short, this new story takes place after season 6 finale and will include pokemon being summoned into Equestria and brainwashed into an army. To counter it, Twilight with Discord's help summon a Pokemon Master into Equestria so she can share her experiences and information and help them prepare a plan how to deal with this threat.

Since anime and games never touched on topic of Pokemon Master (basically, the best of the best that every trainer want to be), with pokemon champions of each regions and leagues being the best we got. I made my two OC's to fill that role.

Astra Longshot, who after five years of being a trainer managed to defeat all elite four's and all pokemon champions from all regions to gain title of Pokemon Master and defended it for three years. She'll need to provide her assistance and somehow survive Twilight's endless thirst for knowledge.

Nica, she's Raichu and Astra's partner. She may be one of most reliable pokemon on Astra's side, but she have a softer side and many insecurities. Her interaction with Pinkie and Fluttershy are certainly may favorites.

In this story, Pokemon master and her team will cooperate with Twilight and her friends to protect Equestria. Starlight, Discord and even Royal Sisters will play a vital role in the story as well.

I don't know if any of you would be interested in such a crossover since in a sense, it is HiE story despite focus being on pokemon, but I hope at least some of you will give it a chance. Maybe it will be good enough to pass time until I can get Ponyville's Tiny Librarian back on track.

Cheers.

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Comments ( 17 )

So that's what happened. I just hope it won't be held off for too long. :fluttershysad:

I've never got the hatred for HIE stories, I find them interesting.

I can help if you want to, but I can't help you with Luna and the Apple family. Only gramma mistakes and such.

It would be my pleasure to do that for you :twilightsmile:

>I will return to this story at one point in the future once I'll find someone who can help me keep quality of the story on high level.

>In the meanwhile, I decided to write a Pokemon/MLP crossover with two OC's that I always wanted to use, but didn't know how until now.

:derpyderp1: What?

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Depending on when i'll find enough help to keep quality of the story. Grammar mistake fixing is good and all, but opinions and advices are necesery as well so that issues will come up to light during editing instead of being pointed out by readers.

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Cool, maybe you'll like what I came up with.

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I will send you link to goggle doc and see what you can do. However editing alone may not be enough. Proof-reading help to keep quality of the story on reasonable level, especially advices on what can be improved.

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Long story short, the quality of my stories was high thanks to skilled proof-readers who helped me out. It will be hard to keep such quality without skilled help.

Also, pokemon/MLP crossover was something I wanted to do in a while, mostly due to my Astra and Nica ( OC's I made). I hope the story itself will be interesting enough.

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I was making a joke.

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The crossover is uploaded. I hope you guys can at least give it a chance, and who knows, maybe it will prove entertaining.

Link - Summoning of a Pokemon Master

Cheers

Hello! Yes, I'm one of the recent posters on the "Ask Twiny" Blog. :twilightsmile: Anyway, I wanted to ask, would you be against someone doing a fanfic of your fanfic-verse? Y'know, if someone wanted to write and post a fic about Twiny that was a fanfic of your Twiny universe, but they kept the characters close to the personalities you've portrayed them with. Would you be okay with that if credit for was given for your work and original idea? I'm just a super-big Twilight fan, and the Twiny version is such a cutie! I'd love to try my hand, but I believe heavily in credit where credit is due.

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I wouldn't mind if you wrote a story about Twinyverse. Under normal circumstances I would volountier to pre-read it, but I'm too busy to do so, so all I can do is to wish you luck. Feel free to ask questions with messages.

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Thanks! I'll come straight to you if I have ANY pressing questions! :)

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I look forward to it! <3

I'd be willing to try to be an editor who gives advice, if you you'd have me. I make corrections on stories I read anyways, and have wanted to try to be one for a while now. I've never done it before, however, so you would need to tell me if I'm doing anything that bothers you or doing it incorrectly...

How's it going on finding editors? And have you tried looking at the Editing Groups on the site? See if any of them are interested?

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Nope. I tried in the past, but no one could match the quality of Kudois. I am focusing my efforts on other stories for the moment.

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Sad to hear, but understandable.

Comment posted by Void_Walker81 deleted Oct 12th, 2018

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Are you still on the lookout for an editor? If so I would be more than happy to apply. DM me if you want.

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