So yeah, sorry for the long silence, but I figured now would be as good a time as any to say that you'll be getting the next chapter of Alicornae tomorrow, and it's gonna be a doozy! I'm currently in Nebraska right now for the eclipse, but that also gave me the perfect excuse to finish up this chapter and get it out to my waiting public!

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After a long wait and many, many frustrating nights spent banging my head against this, I'm happy and relieved to say that chapter 8 of Alicornae is up for your viewing pleasure! Come take a gander, and remember that any critiques and constructive criticism are more than welcome!

Whew... glad that's finally done

P.S. Also did a little bit of work on Chapter 7 to make some stuff flow better!

Yadda yadda yadda, you know the preamble for this (sorry for going incommunicado).

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Howdy y'all, long time no talk to! So, good news is that college is over until the fall (got all B's, in case you were curious), and that means I'm back on my writing, starting with a quick update to Ch. 7's description of the thestral corpse. I changed a few descriptors to make it fit with some scene work I'm doing for Ch. 8, so enjoy that.

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Sorry for the slightly longer wait in this one, it took me a bit to really hammer down how I wanted this chapter to go. Anywho, enjoy the new Chapter where tensions get raised and dark secrets start to be revealed! As always, constructive criticism and comments are welcome and appreciated!

Now to get back to Breath of the Wild and try not to lose my resolve...

Another week, another chapter, this time filled with feels! As always, comments and constructive criticism are more than appreciated, and enjoy!

Well aren't you guys some lucky ducks! I think I finally have a decent writing schedule down, and that can only mean that y'all are getting some new horsewords for your continued enjoyment! Feel free to leave comments and constructive criticism as always, and thanks again for reading!

What's this? Two new chapters within a reasonably spaced time frame?! Certainly the sky is falling and the time of Ragnarok is upon us!

In all seriousness though, yes, the fourth chapter total and first chapter of Part II for Alicornae is up and ready for your reading pleasure. As always, comments and constructive criticism are more than welcome.

Thanks again for reading, and I hope you brought some sunscreen because it's about to get pretty toasty up in here

So, as I was having my friend read through my newest chapter he happened upon a pretty monumental boo-boo where I accidentally left the original text from part of the "Twilight's Prejudice" scene in there, leading to what is essentially a doubling of the same block of text. This has since been rectified

Thanks again for humoring my mistakes!

So, after a few rounds of criticism in the comments I decided to change the "Twilight is prejudiced" scene up a bit to show more even-handedness on her part as well as fix some characterization issues. I write these chapters really late at night (as can be seen by the time I'm writing this blog), so sometimes things sound good to a sleep-deprived mind that wouldn't to one that isn't. I also expanded on Starlit selecting her gear just for some added fluff and flavor text, so enjoy that!

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So long has this been coming that I've actually sort of forgotten how to do one of these. That being said, yes, thine eyes dost not deceive thee, the third chapter of Alicornae: The Legend Of Starlit Sky is up! As always, comments and constructive criticism are welcome, and feel free to point out any typos I may have missed (being your own editor is rough).

Thanks again for all the patience!

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Man, it's been a while since I've made one of these! But yes, thine eyes dost not deceive thee, I have finally posted the second chapter to Alicornae: The Legend of Starlit Sky. I'm not gonna lie, this one was a long while coming but here's hoping that it'll hold you over while I get started on the first Chapter of Part II: The Searing Plains!

Thanks again so much for your patience, and any critiques and comments are always welcome!

And now, at long last, Alicornae: The Legend of Starlit Sky is up on EQD! I had to do a couple more go throughs of stuff to fix on it, but that was just some more tiny grammatical and mechanical things.

Here's the link, and here's to my second approved story by EQD!

So I spent about 2 & 1/2 hours last night listening to Pontiff Sulyvahn's theme from Dark Souls III and hammering through all the changes that the EQD pre-reader wanted me to make. Most of them are little mechanical and syntax fixes that you probably wouldn't even notice unless you were looking for them, but the big one I worked on was expanding the scope of Starlit's "vision" from about half-way through the chapter. After reading what the pre-reader said about it (that it read like "someone

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So I just got my feedback on Alicornae back from the pre-reader at EQD, and they said that there's a lot to like and the fixes that need to happen are mostly mechanical, as well as a few blunt phrasing a that need some work. This is the type of feedback that I got from them when writing The Princess and The

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So, remember that blog post I made a while back saying that I was working on a new story with some Dark Souls flavoring that was going to be a big ol' adventure (the first one I've written since my first fic back in 2013)? Whelp, first chapter of Alicornae: The Legend of Starlit Sky should be up within the hour! Since I have

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