Mar
20th
2017
Alicornae Ch. 3 Update · 7:57am Mar 20th, 2017
So, after a few rounds of criticism in the comments I decided to change the "Twilight is prejudiced" scene up a bit to show more even-handedness on her part as well as fix some characterization issues. I write these chapters really late at night (as can be seen by the time I'm writing this blog), so sometimes things sound good to a sleep-deprived mind that wouldn't to one that isn't. I also expanded on Starlit selecting her gear just for some added fluff and flavor text, so enjoy that!
Thanks again for the comments and critiques! 
This is the Third story I have seen so far that is supposed to take place in Equestria's far, dystopian future with one character needing to fix it and I think it has great potential, because I love it already!
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That's oddly specific praise, but I'll take it! Thanks a bunch man, glad you enjoy it
4464256 My apologies if you disliked me being specific I am trying to emulate Data from star trek: the next generation and Rook Blonko from Ben 10: omniverse
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Nah, it was just a joke, you're good my dude
4464260 Lol, I keep getting on to my parents because they can't take a joke yet here I am being a hypocrite
Don't worry, we know Twilight is an old racist anyway.
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Well, less racist and more just insecure around other races that leads to fear-based discrimination