I spoke with Alexstrazsa a few weeks a go, and he told me that My Mortal Big Brother now has another shot at Equestria Daily. Prior to this I had asked new editor Koekelbag (who by the may be the best who's ever volunteered for me) to help me clean up the other chapters.

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I'm having someone clean up the chapters. So far only the first chapter has been altered. I also took the liberty to reword some stuff and make a few minor changes and omissions. Besides one added sentence to Cystail, and some deletions of unsanitary descriptions of furniture, nothing major was changed. I figure I let you guys know when ever something like this happens, in case something major ever does change by mistake and some goes. "This line wasn't here before or, what happened to that

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For those of you who are wondering, I'm taking a break from my righting wright now in order to reduce stress. I can't considerate when I have school working looming over my mind, and I need to focus on keeping my stress levels in check.

Also, I'm happy to announce I found a new editor who going to be correcting past and future chapters of My Mortal Big Brother.

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95% Finished. I'll finsh the last bit tomorrow. If someone could track down an editor for me, I'll gladly have chapter 15 up by this weekend.

Also, what you guys think of the site up dates. I think it's pretty cool.

In an attempt to add a little more depth to Shadows Wing's Character, there is a part in chapter 15 where he will reveal a secret about himself to Shining. This "secret" is something I've though about over the course of the year and a half I've been working on this story, but until now I've never found any reason to add it. However, this secret will may come off as either a great addition or complete added on betrayal to his character, so I'm not sure if I should add it.

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I don't know when I'll find more time to wright. I may decide to add more to the chapter, but I probably should keep it short so I can flesh out any additional scene Yeah, that's what I'll do.

Any way, I forgot who was up for editing and who isn't. I would prefer to have someone who'd edited this particular story before, but if no one responds I'll just find one latter in the group forms. Thank you all for being a patient audience.

Updated the description to help draw new readers and to foreshadows some of the events that are currently taking place in the story. Please tell me what you think.

The prequel is not a required read. Spoilers in the comments.

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An old character I was originally going to have crop back up (can't say who) got written out. If I can, I will include him in but it won't but it might not be necessary. Also, in this next chapter, I'm some information about Shadow Wing's character is going to be revealed. It's not what I originally interdependent, even if the ideas did crop up a few times during the writing process. However, if all goes well, I'll be able to give Shadow Wing the amount of depth he deserves. Some of you may

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I was hoping by now that more stories like (Big) Macrotosh or anything written by Meagapone would have surfaced onto the site by now. I wonder if it's because marcophilia is really that rare a fetish, or if the people who are into it are too nervous to post. Also, even though I focus on normal clean wrighting, would anyone like to see more wacky fetish content from me in the future.

What are your thoughts on this?

Craps happening that's really dragging me down. I just really can't wait till I don't have to deal with collage bullshit anymore. My personality can be quite bitter at times when things aren't looking all that good. I tend to say some really nasty shit. I become another person. My normal personality is one of optimism and perseverance. I want to see the good in people, and I want to laugh and have a good time. Things crop up that keep getting in the way of that.

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I feel like a I offended some of my readers today. I hope you all can forgive me. I was being inconsiderate. I kind of going through a period where I'm still trying to figure out what I consider to be right and wrong. I hope if you were offended, you can understand and forgive me.

It happens some times. I'll still stick around. I'll leave the group up as a joke to Kighty though. Sorry for the scare. I just want to be pround to post stuff here. My family knows of my account (though I never show them my clop). They are really proud of my success, even if they don't get the whole pony thing. Anyways, I'm only on guy. I can't control the masses.

In response to the Bad Dragon ads that have been popping up on Fimfiction, and the fact Kighty has not reasoned to my PM, I've taken the liberty of making a group to raise awareness of just who is sponsoring our stories. I've been taking populate fix on the site and adding them to group folder to help get peoples attention. There a chance the admins might ban me for a time for this, but it's a risk I'm willing to take. I've always belied the clop side of fimfiction to be just that... fiction.

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Chapter 15 is in the works. Already got stuff written down. Until than, thank all of you who at least read the first chapter of my saga. At this rate, I should each 3,000 by next summer, maybe even sooner. At that point, I'm just going to be a complete state of disbelief. You all are inspiring me to really consider writing a real novel one of these days. Until than, I'll stick to pony fiction.

The begging has been reworded and eddied slightly. The events are the same.

I'll try and show a little more confidence in myself for now on. Questioning and learning is good, but I should get stuck on mistakes. Even some of my favouite stories of all time like the Star Wars saga, Game of Thrones, Dr.Who (used to be a big fan before Angles take Manhattan), and even MLP. I need to embrace my flaws wile still trying to improve on them. I guess I'm just really nervous about school and getting the grades I need for my school ship. I'll try and get over it. Anyways, chapter

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I feel like my story will never be as good as I want it to be. I feel like I've gotten better, but not enought to give you the story I promised. What shoud I do.

Almost no comments were posted today. That's my favorite part of posting. Hopeful more people will have stuff say tomorrow. After one wicked harsh review, I need to know if I'm heading in the right direction. If you read the chapter today, feel free to post feed back here if you like. For those that hadn't, avoid the comment section cause spoilers. I will say this is currently the darkest chapter in the story. There's no gore or hard core torture, but one character takes some physical abuse.

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It's all good now.