Important Ancounment + Teaser for Chapter 16 · 5:12am Dec 12th, 2014
I spoke with Alexstrazsa a few weeks a go, and he told me that My Mortal Big Brother now has another shot at Equestria Daily. Prior to this I had asked new editor Koekelbag (who by the may be the best who's ever volunteered for me) to help me clean up the other chapters.
The reason why I mark this as an important encounter is because this means changes are going to be made to the story again, but not mostly miner details, sentence structure, continuity fixes, and any extraneous stuff. The biggest change is that I'm ommitting Surpises message to the audience along with Chaotic Minds cameo in the Trial of Laughter chapter. I asked Chotic in advance if that was ok first since that cameo was a personal thank from me to him and I didn't want to take that away with out make sure he was ok with it first. He didn't seem to mind, so I guess that means I'm in the clear.
Now for the Teaser
I've been thinking about the events and the direction I want to chart for the story. For a wile, I got stump because a peace was missing to pull one of my planned plot points off. Then one day when I was in my cafeteria at my collage, it dawned on me. For everything to play out the way I wan't this character needed to enter the events. He or she will appear in chapter 16. And if there's anything J.J. Abrams has taught me, is that nothing builds hype like small glimpses of what's to come without wile at the same time not revealing the direction.
So here are my clues.
1. A word connected to this Character.
2. This Movie
(No Jack Bauer is sadly not coming to help Shining.... But that would be freaking awesome, but too silly.)
3. Lyric from one of the first verses of this song.
Please not I have not even started an outline for this chapter, so it may still take some time. However, I am almost free, and am now fully motivated to continue this adventure.
