TCadenza's Inside Story

• MLP: FiM
• Comedy
• Random
• Sci-Fi

A group of ponies help Cadance deal with her internal problems head on

• Sex
• Alt. Universe
• Celestia
• OC
• Doctor Whooves
• Other
• Cadance

NightFurySpeedey8156 · 12k words  ·  16  5 · 792 views

Review: Cadenza’s Inside Story

Tags: Sex, Comedy, Random, Sci-Fi, Alternate Universe

Summary:  An oc named Night Fury.  (must be an Avenger from an Agent of Shield right??? Nick Fury, we have Night Fury… could be Night Fury on how to train your dragon?)

Summary 2: Sounds like Saints row 2…  Gangs and aliens, am I right? (kingdom invasions)

Review:  The story seems funny but it’s an alright fic not a perfect fic but at least average.  There were some laughing parts I have to give a lot of effort into.  The thing that I dislike about this is B:  it’s like scripting a little bit.  To me, it’s on the edge.  But let's step that aside… is the story interesting to read?  Yes.  Is it done well?  Perhaps.

I have to give this at least a 6/10…  There was some cliche.

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Nice review