TVenturing in the Void

• MLP: FiM
• Adventure
• Slice of Life

Enraged that she had been exposed, Starlight retreated into the tunnels. However, she forgot two, very important things that she hadn't even thought about before running off.

• Starlight Glimmer

Catpaw616 · 2.4k words · 364 views

Review: Venturing in the Void

Tags: Adventure, Slice of Life

Summary: This feels like a short full-concentration story.

Review:  This isn’t good or terrible. I have to say it is decent right off the bat… I feel like this needs to be a bit longer.  The idea of this is really good like golden… I still think it needs a bit more words to make people go in awe of this fiction.  Maybe a sequel?

The thing I can give you is a 6/10 for this.  I do love the idea for this story and I feel like you can make a sequel for it.

May the forth be with you.

Thanks for reviewing my story! I'll work on longer one-shots so it could feel more developed. Thanks for your honest opinion!

This isn’t good or terrible.

Not great, not terrible.