I have a new Fallout Equestria story and I'm hoping to get someone to proofread it for me I need them to be a little critical but helpful critical not douchebag critical.

I need them to tell me where things are falling short

I have tried other groups but I'm not very well liked here due to my moral values.

And unfortunately every attempt I have made to get feedback has just been people screaming and crying about how apparently missing a. On the 3rd paragraph down automatically makes my story garbage and therefore not worth reading

So please if you are up for some proofreading and you don't have a hidden agenda of absolutely hating me please give me a ring

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Sorry Sanguine, I'd love to but I simply don't have the time too.

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Please let me know when you can TwT

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Fallout Equestria store

Yes, I'd like to buy a few stealth bucks and a dozen RPG ammo, please. Thank you.

6040342 Feel free to ask for help in my main group (which has 728 members) as well. :)

Here: https://www.fimfiction.net/group/207724/the-insane-creators-guild