His name is Free, and he was a slave. But when he found his opening and escaped his owners, he finds that the wasteland holds its own horrors. Will he remain uncorrupted? Or will the wasteland wittle away all that he holds dear until he breaks?
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If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
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Like if I had to pick actors? Oh boy...
Let's see...
Sentinel's voice is largely based off of Thatcher in this video.
I've never really thought about Free and Jerry though. I guess Free would be like... Matthew Lillard.
And Jerry would be a bit like... Ashley Johnson
Them damn Eldritch monsters keep peaking up in your story! Watch out free, you are getting sucked into things no mortals should ever deal with!
Nitpicks:
"all concern" Should it not be concerned? That is how I have heard the saying go before.
"A cold dread welled up in the pit of my stomach and I did my level best to ignore it. " I think another word would be better here, first thought is "very"
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Hey Doomande.
I wouldn't say its Eldritch, but its certainly a thing. We'll be seeing soon enough.
Now for the edits. Its only concern because Its referring to a single individual who is only showing concern (hence all concern). Admittedly, its a little clunky. I might change it.
Level best is an idiom. The very best one is able to do at some task or activity. I'm just not good at math, so, believe me, a B- in Algebra means that I've done my level best.
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Thanks :D
Awesome story. Looking forward to seeing more updates.
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Hey there! Glad you like it! I am about halfway done with chapter thirteen at the moment and have the outline of the rest of the story planned! Stay tuned!