Sidestory to Fallout Equestria: Commonwealth. A wounded alicorn washes up on the shores of mysterious Fog Harbor, suffering a crisis of faith and implored to 'Be Better'.
8974751 Yeah, still need to work on it I think. Wanted to use the Lead Belly perk considering where it ended, but have to tinker with it more for alicorns.
The mare looking back this time wasn't Virescent the dark child of the Goddess, or Virescent the fanatical priestess of the Church of Balefire, it was Junior Detective 3rd Class Vira... A much kinder, happier and brighter version of herself than she had ever seen. Her deep purple hat was cleaned and broken in to set atop her large head stylishly, the wide brim slightly hiding her smoky eyes and their new lilac eyeshadow matching the streak in her silky mane, lending her an alluring, mysterious air.
Mr. Cane closed his single eye and radiated the warm sensation of a smile his robotic body couldn't really display in response. "The real Shroud was created out of love Vira, to avenge a star crossed couple. What is justice but feeling love for everycreature dear? Wanting everyone to be treated fairly as you'd expect to be treated? Luna created it out of love for ponykind, and it was shaped by her own dreams of love, a male alicorn right?"
"That's why it was so horrible when it was corrupted and fallen dear. The deepest love can turn to darkest hate. The thing that was left of the real Shrouded Stallion when his love was twisted... Let's just say I'm glad it's your stallion and not the real one. I don't know if it's his virtue since I've never met the buck, but a fan running around dressed up as my Shroud earning your love shows he knows that's what's important. The love of a good mare is the most powerful magic around for a stallion, can let him do impossible things to make her happy, just like you're doing new things and trying to change for him hmm? So let's make him see all the love you feel in this piece, don't be afraid to show it off!"
Oh, ho. Ho ho. Innnnnteresting. Let me just file this into 'Galliar was almost right' drawer, case file 'Fast is the Shrouded Stallion'. Because what is Fast if not loving - see his genuine affection for his entire harem -, and what is fast's love if not a breeding ground for his and 'Be Dark's hatred and justice? That little bit of insight is kind of, sort of, a really big deal though, and I'm kind of surprised to see it here before the main story. Lots of people are going to miss that, sadly. All the more reason for Vira and Nick here to get through this case and get home.
But this isn't about Fast (mostly). This is about Vira and her redemption. A redemption that reminds me of Sunset's in EQG. I mean, before she was powerful, loud and in your face about her standing. Now that she was beaten and reformed, she's become fairly meek and especially humble. Funnily enough, the Wasteland has actually given Vira a better chance at redemption than high school gave Sunny, which I can only take as proof that High School is worse than the apocalypse! Q.E.D.
She craned her neck back to take in the long tails of her coat swishing around her hindlegs, flicking her tail and frowning at the wobble of her rump sourly. ( I do NOT have a big ass... ) That minor annoyance was outweighed by the rest of what she saw, lifting the coat aside to admire the sheer black stockings leading to the darling dark violet shoes on her rear hooves clicking on the tiles.
interesting chapter keep it up.
I don't think this perk makes sense in alicorns...
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Yeah, still need to work on it I think. Wanted to use the Lead Belly perk considering where it ended, but have to tinker with it more for alicorns.
This needs to be put into art form. NEEDS to be!!
Oh, ho. Ho ho. Innnnnteresting. Let me just file this into 'Galliar was almost right' drawer, case file 'Fast is the Shrouded Stallion'. Because what is Fast if not loving - see his genuine affection for his entire harem -, and what is fast's love if not a breeding ground for his and 'Be Dark's hatred and justice? That little bit of insight is kind of, sort of, a really big deal though, and I'm kind of surprised to see it here before the main story. Lots of people are going to miss that, sadly. All the more reason for Vira and Nick here to get through this case and get home.
But this isn't about Fast (mostly). This is about Vira and her redemption. A redemption that reminds me of Sunset's in EQG. I mean, before she was powerful, loud and in your face about her standing. Now that she was beaten and reformed, she's become fairly meek and especially humble. Funnily enough, the Wasteland has actually given Vira a better chance at redemption than high school gave Sunny, which I can only take as proof that High School is worse than the apocalypse! Q.E.D.
Where'd you get this quote from?
Is she writing this story? Or is she butting in?
She took the "Acid"