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Bad Dragon


I write so that one day I may finally stop writing and be free, but these damn new ideas keep finding ways into my brain. I need to write more to vent them out!

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Aug
18th
2022

MLP short 23: Another Pony's Trash (my commentary) · 11:38am Aug 18th, 2022

Sunny hates birds.
Newspapers hate Sunny. And for some reason, they have glue all over them. Either that or Sunny is slimy.
Sunny is part of the problem.
Sunny must have been living in a cave or a lighthouse for a long time to miss out on reality.
"Zipp track down those litterers!" - Zipp tracks down Sunny right away.
Zipp picks up trash instead of tracking down litterers.
What's the problem with the selfie sticks again?
"Let's clean up like there's no tomorrow." - Why would you want to spend your last day cleaning?
Sunny becomes an alicorn for no reason. And not just the illusion kind of alicorn but with actual flash wings and cocky horn.
"clean up once in a while." - So, trashing is still okay then?
"I announce the brand new yearly cleanup carnival" - What are you Sunny, a princess? Who made you the leader?
Hipster cleaner. - Is he the one who picked up the trash in the movie?

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