Writing Raven to my Liking. · 9:44pm Feb 5th, 2022
https://www.fanfiction.net/r/13298952/
apparently my bitchy is still at it (Being a hypocritical moron again)
Especially when it comes to...
Not to mention your need to "expose" [The Teen Titans] doesn't work when there's nothing to expose aside from you blowing their actions out of proportion or simply fabricating events to make them abusive to fit your non-existent narrative.
I say... Sure it does, because... I'm getting What I want, and that's all that matters to me. (That's all I care about when it comes to fanficiton)
Raven whaps BB simply because she's annoyed by his simple and innocent suggestion.
I say, Raven had no right to do that (Period) I don't care if it's supposed to be slapstick; she had no right to hit him.
So I'd like to see her ANSWER for it, as in... get assaulted right back, and then suffer some more for it.
That goes for all the Titans, Terra... and BB especially.
There are many things that CAN happen, or even SHOULD happen; depending on the characters and situations.
But for me, and just like most people else (Including that idiotic flamer) ...All I really care about... is getting what I want out of them.
blowing their actions out of proportion
What's so blown?
-Raven had no right to smack him. (Period) I don't give a damn about the genre (I don't even consider Teen Titans 2003 comedic in the least) Did she LEGALLY have any right to smack him, just because she finds him annoying.
No... she did not.
Also, here's another thing to consider of what I do with Raven...
Whatever good traits she has, mean nothing to me now. She's more a bitch than she is a saint.
She may be a good superhero, but in the end, in my view, she is nothing-more than a miserable, creepy, twat... and I really want to see her suffer for it. (I want her to get as beaten up as she beat up Beast Boy)
"You're making her out of character"
I don't like her "Character" in canon. Not just because it doesn't suit my needs, but the fact that she gets away with a whole bunch of bad behavior (Like swatting BB, or blowing up her birthday party) when I'd like to see her pay for it.
In other words, I'd like to see BB stand up to her and the others more.
*Passes her a crossword puzzle*
BB: "Raven, check out 26-across."
Rae: "I don't do crosswords."
BB: "Just look at it! 26-across."
Rae: *Checking the answer he's put down.* "Insult me like that again and... *Stops reading* (I'll Kill you!) *She looks up at him*
BB: "I get it right?"
And then she gives it back to him in a sour mood without doing anything.
Raven is in Bitch-mode, and she will stay that way.
-No more words of comfort.
-No more encouraging, heart-to-heart moments.
-Ect, Ect...
(BB got dumped by Terra) "Who cares! suck it up, and get over it!"
None of this... "If you need someone to talk to, I'll be here for you."
-She is to find BB so annoying she can't stand to LOOK at him (period)
-You good "morning" to "Hi" to her, and she'll give you one heck of an angry glare ("Go away.")
-She'll always be rude, grumpy, snarky, sarcastic, uncaring, ect, ect.
...I want her to get beaten up and have it be deserving-- if she behaves like this, then it works.
Especially with what I plan to do to her on Yugioh E-Quest 2.
SPOILER ALERT
Deep down, she always resented BB. She never liked him from day one. She only saw him as nothing but a worthless goofball who would never amount to anything, and wished they were both never on the same team.
*If BB was to be sacrificed to make a plan work, she wouldn't care less. "People come, people go."
Then, after this and her many other flaws and crimes are exposed, (The horrible way she treated BB, as well as her endangering people's lives with her careless business actions) The EQG finally start to chew the Titans out and regard them INDEED as heartless, uncaring, greedy, beasts who's logic are equally as flawed as Beast Boy's, and that it's no wonder they are hated world-wide (Their actions could have caused Canterlot City to lose fund as well, and they WERE OKAY with it.)
The Titans had held back much of their story, all in attempt to cover their past to try and move on and find hopeful ways to be accepted again.
Raven, still outraged and still hateful towards Beast Boy, again-- foolishly-- blames for everything wrong with her life, instead of accepting responsibility for her actions-- decides to hunt him down, duel him... hoping to defeat him, seal him in a card, and (Possibly) destroy it so he'll be out of her life forever, and she can satisfy herself.
This fails horribly as she loses to him again, after such a fierce duel, and then I REALLY GET TO DO WHAT I want to her...
MEGA SPOILER...
After the finishing blow is dealt, because the duel was so intense and strong, the big building, or something behind Raven starts to crumple.
She looks behind her just in time to see it coming down on her and she SCREEEEEEEEEEEEAMS!!! (Because the Malefic World is blocking her powers, she can't defend herself)
Much like when Jedite was about to get hit by a plane...
I look forward to making Raven scream (Because I WANT IT SO)
Luckily, she survives (All the crumpling derbies and the tower falling on her, she manages to stay where she is and pass through large holes avoiding being crushed)
But then, BB starts making his way towards her. She tries to run, but he catches her... and he's ready to teach her a lesson he should have a long time ago!
(17:11 to 18:02)
He seemingly beats her to a bloody pulp. (Making her bleed, giving her a black eye, knocking one of her teeth out) and then looking ready for the finale blow that will end her!!
But really, the beat up scene never really happens; it's all in his mind. Those are what he really wants to do to her (and it's what I want him to do to her)
But really he has the defenseless mad-woman held by the collar of her sweat-shirt, and his left hook up, about to do it... but he doesn't.
Instead of hitting her, he glares her dead in her frightened face (I like seeing Raven fretting in his shadow)
"I am a pro-gamer, and a master duelist! That means I live by a certain code... to never raise my fists in anger (Unless by self-defense)
No matter how tempted I was...
No matter how much I felt they deserved it...
...That I would NEVER... EVER... SETTLE MY ISSUES THAT WAY!!!
You almost made me forget that Code! ALMOST!!"
Then, he simply throws her down and away from him... that's when she gets hit by the Malefic Lightning (She lost the duel)
Raven: "D'AAAAAAA-AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!"
...She's sealed in a card, and it serves her right.
-She blames him for her problems
-She forced him into a duel, intent on Destroying him
-He dueled cuz he had no choice
...Raven brought it all on herself. (Exactly how I WANT IT to be)
Like I said... I want Raven to pay for all the times she was a bitch.
I don't want an apology.
I don't want to work out differences
I especially don't want nor approve of "Trying to grow up and be a better person"
...That's not the way I lived, it's not how I was brought up, it's not what I believe it.
I want... Payback (Vengeance)
And while it's true, no amount of my writing can ever change it for real... I'm not trying to CHANGE the actual show, I'm just trying to get what I want out of these characters.
Yet that stuck-up hater still insists through all his whining and ranting...
"I don't like the way you write, so get off this website.
I don't like the way you think how you see life, and you should be in prison for it.
You're a sociopath, and I don't like you...
I'm right and you're wrong.
You threw the first punch, always, which makes you a bully."
Blah, blah, blah... that's all I see in his words. In the end he's just pathetic because he can't accept that I'm different than he is.
My fanfiction is not for writing things I enjoy or love to watch... it's about anger, vengeance, and stress busting (Self-serving) Period.
Just I'd rather use music and video games Not solely for entertainment, but for triggering of emotions, inspiration for art, and (In fanfiction) use it as a weapon to bring pain and suffering to characters.
https://www.fanfiction.net/r/13298952/
Seriously, this brat is a worthless dick, thinking he can accomplish something by bullying someone for doing something he hates.
Ah well... he can't stop me. Victory is mine. He will always lose.
how did an argument start from a ten year old sho-
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The hater's still go off his rocker... https://www.fanfiction.net/r/13298952/
Wanting me to change just cuz he can't stand that I'm different (He hates Sociopaths)
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oh boy,i have manic deppression (socipathy but depressed! twice the fun!)
also this sounds like he expects you to change your brain and dna to be normal
like - just ignore him
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No he expects worse...
https://www.fanfiction.net/r/13298952/
Still can't get it through his head...
-THIS is what Fanfiction is for (Self-serving)
-He can forget about his crusade against Sociopaths. (He'll never be rid of them)
-And he cannot stop me
-And he has won nothing with his little "mission" to talk down to me.
-He also has no right to tell me that I have no rights as a human
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you know the title of the fic he commented on "as long as shes happy" reminded me of this stand up from the late greg giraldo
enjoy!
Do you consider yourself sociopathic?
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Partly... but then again people will LABEL me as such no matter what.
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Well, what do you label yourself as?