Feb
1st
2022
Just realized a plot hole in the latest chapter. · 7:33pm Feb 1st, 2022
Sunny acts surprised by izzy's magic, when she'd already seen it before in chapter one.
I'll go ahead and tweak the chapter later when I get back home. :P
this is what I get for not having prereaders for this fic lmao
There's a few other little things here and there as well that should probably be fixed up before they start annoying me. Man, I should've done a better editing pass before posting.
Haven't read it yet, but actually this may not be a problem. I'm assuming this only takes place a short time (as in less than 1-2 months) after the G5 movie, in which case it would still be natural for everypony to be surprised by Izzy using magic. It's something that our beloved G5 ponies are going to have to adapt to. It's not a plot hole, it's an opportunity. :)
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No no, I mean sunny was surprised by izzy doing basic levitation, even though she was picking apples using her magic in chapter 1 with sunny watching.
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Ohhhhhh... never mind
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Yup :P