Chapter 12 Up for Realizies · 12:27pm Nov 17th, 2021
Chapter 12 is live and boy howdy is it a long one! I broke my goal of keeping it around 5K. I know I could've cut the chapter early after the first line break, but I didn't have the heart to leave on a cliffhanger after last time. For those of you who like longer chapters, I hope this makes up for nothing last week! For those of you who don't like more horsewords per week, my sanity thanks you, but also you're reading an evolving long-fic. I question your judgement.
As does Upper Crust, but she is very judgemental.
In related news, Upper Crust is finally back in the story along with motivations and the song I consider her theme song for the story. Hope you enjoy Wonderland.
Anyway, I accidentally pressed the Publish button again tonight, but it was when I was wrapping up my final pass, so unless you jumped into it the SECOND it went live, you should have the final version...
But I am also tempted to listen to it one more time using text-to-speech...
I think I might be starting to give into my over-analyzing problem. Listening back to the words that I write helps me catch a lot of errors I wouldn't normally see, but it also drives me mad. I have listened to this chapter in its entirety probably eight times since Monday. A blessing and a curse for sure. Now I want to go back and listen to the rest of Electro Swing and clean it up... ugh...
So, what now? I need to start on Chapter 13. I probably won't have time to until Saturday, and my brain could use a couple days to recuperate. We are starting to get back into more light-hearted territory again. Need to see more princesses, minotaurs, and Melodies.
Stay tuned and hope you enjoy the story! I'll keep doing my best to tell it.
- Rego
