Kindred Pairs - Chapter 4 · 5:50am May 28th, 2021
"This has been a treat to read so far, it's been an extremely graceful and engaging sequence of character pieces. After all this, I am hoping we will see their reunion, or at the very least some of the aftermath of it. You are absolutely spot on with this cast, and I am here for more."
After eleven years away from this subject matter, I really cannot overstate how much I absolutely melt at feedback like this. My decade of creating pony fiction has clearly done wonders for the quality of my writing.
I love the pastry ideas.
But yeah, seems like an accurate day-in-the-life post-partner return.
And why did Suzie call Takato the Angry Kid, again? I don't remember how he acted when he first met her.
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Happened twice in the dub.
"Hello? Hello? Hello?"
"Stop saying hello and get Henry!"
"It's some angry kid, for Henry!"
"I'm not angry!"
Then a few episodes later when he called at 6:30 in the morning to see if he wanted to go patrolling.
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Oh, that's right. I remember that now.
Ah, Suzie, every babysitter's nightmare.
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Don't give me ideas.