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KarmaSentinal


Inspiring drifter in the sea of the written language.

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  • 5 weeks
    Not dead, here's a snippet to make it up.

    While I've been taking a really long break, I'm still writing while I can. Looking back, I was pushing a chapter nearly every month, and it finally caught up with me. Because of this, I'm trying another approach I've wanted to do for awhile, which was waiting until the story was finished first before publishing it slowly over a couple of weeks. For Colonel Hooves, there will be three chapters

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  • 37 weeks
    Colonel Hooves nearing the end, what are some plot points you feel need addressing?

    Hello people!

    Chapter 28 is finished, and I'll be starting the edits real soon, and with its completion I was left with the realization the story is finally reaching the end. I suspect another two chapters minimum before I write up an epilogue to wrap the story up, and this left me in a spot...

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  • 39 weeks
    Colonel Hooves chapters being resumed.

    Hello, I just wanted to make a quick post that after taking a break to focus work on another story, that I'll be resuming work on Colonel Hooves. I'm about 6k into the next chapter with a possible 5k more to be added.

    Here's a sneak peek!

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  • 56 weeks
    Colonel Hooves Chapter 27 Preview.

    Just a small preview of the upcoming chapter, and I'm happy to note we passed 5k words and are on trajectory to reaching 10k very soon!

    “Order and Harmony, how can a single room fill me with such disdain to work, and actively seek a reason to escape its encompassing walls?”

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  • 57 weeks
    Colonel Hooves Chapter 27 update.

    Nothing extraordinary to say other then the changes have taking effect for good. My chapters will be much longer then before so be ready to read some chunkers in the coming months, because chapter 27 is already 4k words and all of that is just talking filler and none of the plot. I'm projecting another 10-12k chapter by the end of the month.

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Feb
28th
2021

One final call for new recruits to join the Crystal Guard! · 2:43pm Feb 28th, 2021

I already put out a call before, but I wanted to give one final chance for your OCs to join. I'm nearing the end of the newest chapter, and the one after that will show off the new recruits with Idol having to do Colonel things. I already have the list from the last call, but if you want to add more or change some things than feel free!

Any questions please feel free to drop a comment or Pm me.

Comments ( 5 )

i think you have in the past at this point in the story ( my memory really sucks old age and all) but you are free to use Harts Fire..:scootangel:

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I do have your oc information, and I do have a plan for his introduction.

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friend don't' ever get old.
i would say it sucks but i forget.
i am not the oldest brony i all most think that may go to my mother who is 87 and loves pony.

I have a OC named Medical Atlas.
Special talent in epidemiology but always seem to end up i professions not related to it.
Green coat, brown maned unicorn with a tendancy to go ballistics when plans aren’t followed. Always seems to be in a grumpy state - but this could be attributed to the fact that he sees himself contradicting his own plans and always seeking to rectify that. But outside that, generally a pleasant pony to talk with, with a host of topics to talk about from his experiences in jobs outside the realm of epidemiology.
Born in Manehatten, left Manehatten for better pastures - and in this universe presumbaly - ended up in the guard because he heard the pay was good. Better than being a handypony without a handypony’s cutiemark.

Edit: Forgot to add likes and dislikes.
Likes books, sketching things, alcohol, and studying pony interactions as if they’re bacteria interacting with other bacteria.
Dislikes loud sounds, taxes, and yogurt for some reason

Sorry for the late submission, and sorry if this screws up your timetable, but only knew of this now.

Last time you only asked for OCs but in the comments in the story itself you mentioned crystal pony OCs specifically. I have one of those.

Onyx Crusher an Earth Crystal Pony, his special talent is wrestling with a laurel crown cutie mark. Appearance is a massive draft stallion of black coat and silver grey mane. Before Sombra he was the local Crystal City champion with ambitions of becoming the Imperial champion. During the enslavement he used his strength to cover the quotas of weaker ponies to shield them from punishment. Now he wants to use it to prevent such a thing from ever happening again.

The inspiration for his creation was the Crystal Empires love of jousting. Back in the day while popular jousting was the sport of the rich given the cost of horses and armor. Nearly as popular but open to any class was wrestling. In half of Europe every village had a local style and a local champion who they took great pride in. It occurred to me that Crystal Ponies likely had similar enthusiasm.

Onyx originally had a loud boisterous personality and reveled in his celebrity. To survive the crystal mines he had to learn to hold his tongue and keep his head down and to act subtly to help his fellow ponies. Post liberation he’s struggling to find balance and figure out who he is now.

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