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Phantomdust


Always enjoy writing or your stories will suffer as you do.

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  • 141 weeks
    My Resignation

    It is with great reluctance I must announce that I am discontinuing Technology is Magic and The Nightmare Technomancer. My tagline on my profile is “Always enjoy writing or your stories will suffer as you do.” Well, I’m just not enjoying it anymore and I know that if I force myself to continue, the story will suffer for it. I will be the first to admit that I made mistakes while writing this. I’m

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  • 144 weeks
    Should Pixel die in the rewrite of Chapter 27?

    Okay chapter 27 and 28 weren't as well received as I hoped (especially chapter 28). I'll readily admit I made some mistakes with them so I'm going to rewrite them in order to fix those mistakes. In the new version, Pixel will be the one to be shredded by Natura instead of Gerhardt. So should she die in chapter 28 while Gerhardt is trying to fix her? Or should she live but suffer some sort

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    2 comments · 245 views
  • 148 weeks
    Demigod experiments question.

    So I'm thinking in the next chapter I'll have Gerhardt conduct an experiment in an attempt to use what he learned from scanning Celestia and Luna to use necromancy to create the soul of a demigod. I have a few different ideas of how this could possibly go, but I wanted to ask what you all think first. Should he fail? Should he succeed? If he succeeds should it move on to the afterlife as he

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    6 comments · 272 views
  • 151 weeks
    Time skip?

    I'm having a bit of trouble coming up with filler to pad out the story, as you may have been able to tell by the past couple of chapters. So I'm thinking of having a bit of a time skip a couple of months ahead all the way to winter. Would you guys mind if I did so? I mean if you don't want me to, I can keep trying my best to come up with a bit more filler. After all a season only lasts about

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    1 comments · 169 views
  • 163 weeks
    Which version of Chpt 16 do you want?

    I have multiple versions of chapter 16 that I've thought of and have partially written out.

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    2 comments · 157 views
Feb
4th
2021

Should the Nature Spirit get free in the next chapter? · 7:34am Feb 4th, 2021

So, I'm in a bit of a conundrum at the moment. You see Gerhardt has been in Equestria for quite awhile now. That in and of itself wouldn't be a problem if it wasn’t for the fact that the seasons have to change eventually. I want the seasons to match up with the cannon story so I don't accidentally screw up the timeline.

So with that in mind, I also need the Nature Spirit to be set free before Celestia decides to have Discord reformed. So that leaves me in a bit of a bind. As far as I see it there are effectively two options. The first option is that I have the Nature Spirit escape in the next chapter, then have a winter arc after she is freed, then have Celestia decide to have Discord reformed in the middle of spring or something. The second option is that I have a winter arc now, have the Nature Spirit be freed later, then finally have Discord be reformed at the end of spring or the middle of Summer.

What do you guys think? Should the Nature Spirit be freed in the next chapter or should the next few chapters be filler before the Nature Spirit is eventually released? Keep in mind if she gets free now then Gerhardt will have had effectively zero time to prepare and will not have his army of golems to help fight her. If she gets free later then Gerhardt will have had time to build up at least a few combat golems and other defenses. The consequences of this decision will very likely have a major impact on how the story develops from here on out and may impact the tone of the story.

If you want a darker story with potentially very harsh consequences for the characters then I would suggest voting for the Nature Spirit getting free in the next chapter. If you want a somewhat more relaxed story (though still dark in its own right) with less harsh consequences for the characters than I would suggest voting for the Nature Spirit getting free later on.

Here's a link to a strawpoll: Strawpoll Link

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