Is the rewritten version of chapter 9 better? · 4:31am Jan 9th, 2021
I've finished rewriting chapter 9. I would sort of like to know if you guys think its better or not.
Always enjoy writing or your stories will suffer as you do.
I've finished rewriting chapter 9. I would sort of like to know if you guys think its better or not.
Word of advice, unpublish and publish the chapter again, the only way people would notice the change is those who follow you directly or are in the HiE group like me.
Most people just favourite stories so then don’t get notified of story edits or the author blog.
As for the chapter itself it’s good other than everyone overreaction to the golem, you’d think that old ass beings like Gerhadrt or Celestia would be more level headed in any situation, but who knows, it is a very moinor things.
Cheers.