Sacrifice Update: The Chapter 18 Donation Pool · 11:27pm Dec 19th, 2020
Welp, it's been about a day since I uploaded the lengthy, and very long-anticipated climax to Showing His Place: Sacrifice. This scene was months in the making, and a reveal I was keeping a secret from so many of my friends and readers; even my boyfriend Stormy was unaware of what I had planned! And after hearing so many guesses and theories from avid readers, it was unbelievably gratifying to write out the conclusion that not only shocked everybody (including the characters themselves), but left all my readers satisfied as well~
Just so people are aware, there are at least two chapters left after this. One will be title The Aftermath, and will be set back in the bedroom following the fallout of Shining's big ceremony. For any of you who remember the details of last month's donation poll, it should be easy to guess what one of Sombra's 'punishments' turned out to be; I meant to include that detail in chapter 17, but after writing out over 32000 words, it seemed more fitting to mention it for the Aftermath. Aside from that, the chapter will include Cadance's reaction to the entire ordeal (directed both at Shining and Sombra in private), as well as any other details that would come from Shining's announcement. However, by the time the dust settles down, and the three are left to process what this'll mean for their lives, there will many new, and very dark things that will be enacted from the Royal Couple~
And in preparation of that moment, here's the new Donation Pool for Chapter 18 of Sacrifice, titled The Aftermath:
1.) SuperNorwegianFly [$40] - Princess Celestia actually enacts a full demotion of Shining Armor, including both the Royal and Crystal Guards. She also issues him a new slave status whenever he visits her in private as his Mistress~
2.) Spoonlol [$120] - As a punishment for what he did to Shining, Cadance removes the cuck's cage to place on Sombra~ Along with being left infertile by Celestia and Luna (but not impotent), Sombra will also be forced to wear a chastity cage until Cadance's baby is born. Cadance will be more than fine watching him make out with their slave to get herself off with some toys~
3.) Cold Blood [$135] - As a punishment for his actions, Sombra is forced to watch as Luna temporarily removes Shining's gelding band, and allows him the chance to impregnate her with Sombra being cucked. As soon as he's finished with his "reward," Luna will allow Sombra to geld him once more with her present.
4.) Double R. Forrest [$45] - (In the epilogue chapter after this one) Sombra and Shining Armor's varying testosterone treatments would eventually make the former super massive and muscular, while Shining is left looking like a scrawny weakling beside him~
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Since the holiday season is upon us (and I have to pay rent at the end of this month), please don't hesitate to PM me your ideas, or donate to my PayPal to help me out. I know I've said this before multiple times, but I need to specify that you can NOT include the ideas in the PayPal notes! Message those to me privately so we can discuss it, okay?
Other than that, I still have four stories I've been meaning to finish before 2021; these include a Spike/Iron Will clop with muscle worship & rimming, an update to Silver Soldier's Nightmare Night, and the two stories that won November's Patreon polls. All of these stories will be featured on my Official Patreon Page first and foremost, so don't hesitate to follow for the latest updates to show your support! ;)
Also, I'm happy to say that the final revisions of Brushed Away are almost complete, so I might have an especially special Christmas update very soon~
Daaaaaaaamn did not expect that kind of commission.
Hmmm, that second donation gives me a idea.
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Quick question for people who are invested in this story, since I'm currently on the fence about a specific detail...
What should happen to the sperm sample?~
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I haven't donated anything, but I think that destroying it would be way too cruel imo. That was originally something that Cadance herself insisted on, as one of the reasurances of the gelding taking place. I think Shining already got enough scare from Sombra pulling that prank on him with the yoghurt.
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Well I agree on not destroying the sample.
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Na man. It should be kept safe, it was a sweet agreement between the three.
Maybe instead of destroying it twilight or Cadance decide to do something like this.
Sombra is making his own copious sperm samples before he’s made impotent and Twilight suggest “mixing” the sperm of Cadance two loves. Only the catch is that they drown Shinings Sperm with Sombra’s. Like his container sized sample is overwhelmed and dominated by his cum bucket.
I mean this *is* Shinings bad end story after all.
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I would love to see Shining get ordered to drink it, for a little bonus humiliation.
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we got another suggestion slot open my dude
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Well lets just say that I have talked with V about commissioning a side-story to this where something similar to that happens.
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Damn. This series just won't die. Not sure if that's a good thing or bad thing.
The 4th, please!