ONE HUNDRED DOWNVOTES!!!!

I'VE FINALLY HIT 100 DOWNVOTES!!!

*PUNCHES AIR WITH FIST*

Seriously though, I expected some criticism but bloody hell...

The Changelings were always intended to be FAR darker than in the show and there's a yet unrevealed reason for the Mane 6's 180.

And Applejack isn't a lie detector.

Comments

[Hazard Trishula]

Lol..
Anyway i just wanna know about gordon love life next..
Still loyal to rainbow or maybe...

[Hawker Hurricane]

5402798
I have a plot already laid out but some tweaks will need doing.

[Stardust-pony]

well as i said the bad interaction between the girls and gordon felt really forced, like suddenly they forgot about him and what they had learned about and from him.

specially rainbow dash love to hate in less than half a chapter thing

still i want to know what is coming and know that it’s just the plot moving forward

still too forced thought

a little disappointed for the people disliking the whole story just because they didn’t like how it goes in recent chapters, i could understand that if the story was finished, but man people is really whiny nowadays

thanks for the chapters

[Hazard Trishula]

5402800
Thanks then you have plan for that part...
Congrats on your 700 upvote 🤪

[Stardust-pony]

unless of course you are showing the great manipulative capabilities of a whole race of sly, cruel, ruthless and evil feeling predators

i meat they can literally eat love right
why couldn’t they transform the white in black inside the others hearts

i mean even the griffins looked to edgy from the very start, too convinced of their own morals like any young terrorist or fanatic killer, like there’s not a better outcome than war in their personal opinion... too programmed for that outcome

including the sudden slavery ring found on brink of war

just my thoughts

[Ironside2052]

If Gordon ends up with Rainbow again it will be textbook abusive relationship story have Lyra or a Gryphon but anyone but her at this point I have said my piece everything else.

[Combo_Breaker]

The transformation of red heart made me sick to my stomach

[Shooter5000]

I acoully like the newest chapter. Sure is exciting to see what is to come.

[Hawkx1]

Y’know thinking about it I could see the Chang kings eating all the love they have for Gordon and that’s why. But still you go from mostly trusting to zero love in 10 seconds flat.

[Hawkx1]

Oh BTW there is a suicide/self-harm tag that probably needs to be applied to this story due to the end of the last chapter.

[Norwegian boy]

congratulate?

[Deadpool1]

For me it's the grammar and spelling errors