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Hawker Hurricane


Yorkshireman and tea drinker.

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  • 43 weeks
    THIS IS NOT A DRILL!

    Yes. I've actually done another chapter. Almost two years of having half a chapter just sitting there. It isn't perfect, but it's a small step closer to finishing it.

    3 comments · 430 views
  • 116 weeks
    My nephew needs help.

    A quick update on story progression Put simply, I won't be doing any writing for some time more due to some sad news from the home front. I found out earlier today that my 4 year old nephew is terminally ill, and will be pushing it to see his tenth birthday. His mum (my sister), has set up a fundraiser to help send him to Disneyland Paris while he can. Any help would be appreciated.

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    7 comments · 1,053 views
  • 134 weeks
    New story

    I'm working on a new story that takes place during Gen 5. I've a bit more to do before I release anything, but hopefully I'll have something soon.

    6 comments · 474 views
  • 140 weeks
    It's that time of year again.

    So another year has passed. I'm 31 today. Doesn't seem like five minutes since my last birthday.

    1 comments · 280 views
  • 141 weeks
    Deja vu

    So I see the latest chapter has gone down as well as the previous one.

    The Changelings were intended to be this brutal from the get go. Long before I wrote the chapter.

    And I just know that some of you won't like revelations that will be revealed in a later chapter.

    9 comments · 599 views
Aug
8th
2021

Deja vu · 2:56pm Aug 8th, 2021

So I see the latest chapter has gone down as well as the previous one.

The Changelings were intended to be this brutal from the get go. Long before I wrote the chapter.

And I just know that some of you won't like revelations that will be revealed in a later chapter.

Comments ( 9 )

Oh no I think it is only getting worse

I'll still read until the end. Many don't like the direction this is going, but I do for two reasons; everyone will be forced to undergo a reality check, especially if it was changelings that were responsible for the crimes of humanity and their near extinction, and everyone will have to face the fact that after everything they did, they aren't any better than the very creatures they demonize.

Judgment is coming, and I look forward to it.

Edit: Though if there's one thing I hope doesn't happen, it's that when/ if Gordan finally gets his hands on Chrysalis, his rapist, the changelings that tried to kill the CMCs, and framed him for everything to the point of attempted suicide that no one actually tries to talk him into being the "better person" instead letting him kill them. After everything Chrysalis and her drones did, death would be an act of mercy compared to what I would do if I had the tools and no fear of consequences. Afterall, if the punishment must fit the crime, then what is a suitable punishment for 800+ years of framing humans, extinction/ murder, slavery, and that's just the tip of the iceberg. Then comes what Equestria and the rest of the world, or Celestia at least must be punished for by law? Especially if Gordan is somehow her lover from back then instead of a look a like.

TBH I actually can't wait for the next chapter! I think all this drama and darkness is really good! Really wonder how Gordon will deal with the girls once all this is over.

I think it all started when you had the girls force the male leads of your other stories to go through humiliating situations they practically engineered and gave little to no apology.

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I completely agree with this. I really like where the story is going. I want to see the ponies face the consequences of there actions, to face the reality of what they’ve done. I want to see Gordon to receive justice for his mistreatment from Equestria. I want to see their despair when they see just how badly they fucked up.

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The issues most people have when rape and torture happing in HiEs (other then most don't like rape and torture) is that by the end of the story or ark of the story usually their is no justice for the human. Usually the human has to just deal and the story makes excuses for the ponies actions so the reader forgives them.

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Yeah, I really hate that. JUSTICE FOR THE HUMANS!!!

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They're only owed 800+ years of compensation for what Equestria and the changelings did as well as a near complete rewrite of human history in that world. I'd say humans getting their own country, ALL of Chrysalis's followers be executed indiscriminately or suffer the same treatment for 800+ years, Celestia being removed from power, and the Elements facing appropriate punishments for their crimes would be a good place to start.

5566462 I agree with both your statements, I hope that is what gonna happen in the future

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