Change in chapter eight · 11:22am Nov 21st, 2020
Hey guys. I went back and rewrote the eighth chapter because I didn't like it. I realised I wanted the story to go somewhere else so I cut out the date with Rarity. And so there's is a new scene or two if you feel like reading it.
As always, any criticism is appreciated, good or bad! Hope you're enjoying Power Vessel!