Update 5: What I am planing with Wonders of Arcane. · 9:44pm Sep 11th, 2020
So here is the plan for how Wonders of Arcane as well as some info about it.
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I am going to finish up chapter 2 and edit chapter 1.
Chapter 2 is on the way but don’t know when it will be finished and come out. as I was making chapter 2 some new things came to light that I want to put in chapter 1 that is why I am going to edit it the main focus would be some of the lines as well as the coloration of who is speaking and how they are speaking. But mostly the edit of chapter 1 is only small mistakes and maybe a little change on the moving of the story, but only to make it more alive or something like that.
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My plan of making Wonders of Arcane went from being a story that was trying to make “Celestia the bad guy,” to make it like a “Twilight gets banished” story to “Twilight turn evil” but some of them I scratched as I did not like or I could not envision it. As you already know from the beginning of the story with what happened to Twilight and Celestia capt it from her was a little part of it the first plan. Twilight is also using Arcane arts that are illegal in Equestria that would come from the banishment part of the second approach. Thought Twilight turning evil or not is only for future chapters to see we may also see Celestia being a bad guy getting to see her Daybreaker personality.
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The way I envision the story now is that we have Twilight and Evenfall leaning to work with each other but I will try my best to make it so that it is not all good and sunshine there is a lot of things happening in the world. Why, who, or what is making these things happen, What is even happening future chapters will tell.
They will learn new things together as sisters maybe even more who knows where I am gonna take it I will try my best not to make them too overpowered like giving them disadvantages or make it so they have problems that they need to overcome.
If you have any questions about this story or to me about anything just ask dm me or comment on my stories.
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I am trying my best on Creativity can be Delightful, and am thinking hard on it.
Good luck in all that you do, I can't wait to see your works.
Well first, it's your story, you should progress it as you like. You could aks for a general idea as for asking for minor ideas would defeat the porpuse of writhing in my opinion. Second, take your time, no ine is rushing you, otherwise ther would be more mistakes to correct. All that said, good look and see you next time