Sep
7th
2020
Considering a Reboot · 6:15pm Sep 7th, 2020
I've been writing Death March for about a year and a half, I've read through all your comments and reread the story several times. I feel like there's a lot I could redo better and a lot that I should change. But I'm unsure if I should, so I'd like to leave it to y'all.
There are some things that I won't change, such as the main characters and certain plot points but I'd like your opinions on what I should do.
Feel free to comment and please keep it constructive.
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Toxicfox · 288 views
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It’s been awhile since I read it, but I like the story as it is. However if you feel you can do better by rebooting it, I’m not going to stop you. It’s your decision.
If it was me I'd work on making the coming chapters fit my vision better rather then completely upend the foundation I've already got my stories fanbase sitting on. I've seen VERY few stories finish successfully after starting over. But, it's your story and your the one behind the wheel.
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Fair enough, I'm decently pleased with the plot itself, maybe instead of a reboot I could rewrite the lacking chapters and do some slight retcons to certain aspects of the world-building.
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) but I do remember that it was good and was waiting for more 
. So I am with HydeYmir and SolitariLupus about your reboot and since it’s your story, it’s all up to you 
. Good luck and hope to see more later 
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I felt that you had a very good story going on here. Even though it’s been a while since I had last read it (which I’ll probably re-read
*Gasp*
I've liked the story so far so no need to completely restart either way I'm here for the ride.
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I appreciate it ^_^
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. The only thing I would say is that it has grammatical errors (missing punctuation and other grammatical mistakes) but nothing major that it needs a reboot. Just needs editing 
. But it’s all up to you since this is your story 
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Ok, I went through it again and it’s still good
Well, I really like it and hope to see some more to this story.
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I appreciate your love of the story :) I will definitely go back and edit the errors of the previous chapters once the next chapter is complete ^_^