Honest opinions please

So I went far from my normal writing with Doom of Griffonstone. I’m writing darker themes and details. Not to mention some don’t like the Displaced stories.

I want to know what you all think am I doing alright going so far from my normal content?

Just so you know yes Nightshade will be returning soon I got a few fun ideas!

Comments

[Cloudynight96]

So far I say.you seem to be doing well, just take your time and slowly get a feel for this style of writing.

[duckmagee]

honestly i think it too soon to tell, we really need to see what happens when doom takes over only then will we be able to tell if you do the darker theme well, so far it interesting but not enough depth, Hans needed to realize he not in a comic book character but a bloody tyrant and needs to influence him to protect everyone they meet, while maybe trying to take over the body,

that been said im interested in how real this world is the fact Gilda part of drug business with blueblood does show this world is not as nice as the tv show,

overall im liking it so keep it up
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[Jason Monroe]

As a person that is more partial to Displaced writing that is dark, I can say that cloudy and duck are right. In the end if you try your best to make something that you're happy with, you should be fine.

[KukriRyuTsukino]

I like it.

[DisplacedWriter]

Here's the thing. Everyone will hate the Displaced regardless of how you write it. I've seen hate comments on stories that had alot of like and very little dislike ratio all because the Displaced was mentioned, thus said hate commenters automatically assumed it'd follow the same thing as the others.